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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2001-11-26 09:21 PM


this is unedited...just starting with a title...

~My false happiness~

i thought for once it was real
my false happiness
i thought i learned how to smile
i was wrong
it was all an illusion
a game in my head
now i'm here again
wishing i was dead
these things i thought so true
all revolved around you
now i see the fear
an image oh so near
is a truth that isn't clear...
now the only fear
i tell you dear
i don't know, do i love you?
or is this just...my false happiness?

Nikolette (extra) Sadness

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

© Copyright 2001 Nicole Crisp - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-11-26 09:26 PM


When the right man comes along, he will bring you true happiness!
Be patient dear!

jwesley
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2 posted 2001-11-26 10:05 PM


Like I always say, my friend - enjoy it, relish it, live it while it last - false or otherwise - and when the time comes - move on...gracefully.

jwesley

Startime
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3 posted 2001-11-26 10:14 PM


Never let someone else be responsible for your happiness, dear one. Though a loving man will bring joy it is up to you to have a life and be happy even if you do not have a man in your life. Smile and let the whole world rejoice with you. **hugs** I know about sadness for I too am alone but I am learning how to smile at the world anyway. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Siofra
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4 posted 2001-12-11 01:23 AM


Ohh...I know this feeling! Nice expression of thought!  

I am many.

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-12-11 03:11 AM


When we are alone we think if we could find someone we would be happy...not necessarily true...there are lots of ingredients to happiness...wish I could find the right ones...James
Moonlight Romeo
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6 posted 2001-12-11 02:26 PM


Better to believe in happiness, then to think of sadness.

Flowing from a heart unsure.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

emily
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7 posted 2001-12-11 03:17 PM


Oh, such sad words from a beautiful pen of sincerity  

Emily


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