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RosePetal
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0 posted 2001-11-26 08:24 PM


Would you like to hear a story?
Don't skim down to the ending
It consists of two main characters
Based on true story with no pretending

In colorado, there once lived a male
He met his dreamgirl on a website
Thus begining this true tale
This guy and girl were avid poetry lovers
A few e-mails here and there
Brought them closer and closer to eachother
They began writing one another poetry dedications
Pouring emotions out with no hesitation
For he was the inspiration behind her every creation
And Lady Sparrow, on the other hand
She was Singing Sparrows number 1 fan.
She invaded his dreams at night
With flowers pinned in her hair
Reflecting off window's stream of light
He called her name, reaching out to his true love
She felt so real but looked like an angel from above
Lady Sparrow began to cry sobs of pure joy
As she locked eyes with her lover boy
He held her close with a firm grip
Tears rolled faster, to his shoulder they drip
He whispers to her ear, tickling her ear drum
He says my Lady Sparrow, "I'm so glad you've come"!
Yes she whispers, feels so good to be where you are
but my home is in florida, and this place is far
Won't you please flee with me to where I live?
Silently he nods his head yes
And off they were to where their new home is
They spent hours staring at eachother in awe
So madly in love, you'd think it was against a law
They opened their hearts to small chance
Forever grateful for their newfound romance
They wed and honeymooned
In none other place than Sweetheart's Lagoon
Townspeople cheered for these lovebirds
They sailed far away
Thats the last of them that was heard
They left behind their legacy
For all to know, for all to see
They said, Love can be blind
but your vision will be restored
When it is true love you find,
Don't be afraid to let love in
The door to your heart
years to be open!

The end
Sweet Dreams!


© Copyright 2001 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2001-11-26 08:28 PM


Ah Joanna and Noah....the perfect couple.
I don't know if you have met in real life yet or not but do hope all works out for you.
Joanna...beautiful write and Noah will love it!  ~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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2 posted 2001-11-26 08:32 PM


I am so very glad for both of you. This is a magnificent love story. It is wonderful to find someone to share your heart and soul with. BRAVO!! May your future be filled with sweet love songs of the heart.    

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

RosePetal
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3 posted 2001-11-26 08:35 PM


How did you know it was about Noah...lol..
: )
We have not met yet but we will.
((blushing))

Love,
RP

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4 posted 2001-11-26 08:38 PM




(BIG KISS ON LIPS) (giggles) I love it!!! And we live happily ever after! (smiles) Such a beautiful dream I dream of! (smiles) I LOVE YOU, SWEET JOANNA!!! (showers your lips with kisses) Mmmmmmmmm! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

rosepetals25
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5 posted 2001-11-26 08:42 PM


Joanna,

    I wish the both of you all the luck You two are so sweet *chuckles* I'm glad the two of you found happiness.
    And I liked the poem too I figured I should mention that.. LOL  


Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Domzi
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6 posted 2001-11-27 03:59 PM


Sounds like a bedtime story! Aww, how sweet of you Joanna. Oh yeah, it was obvious that the two of you were talking!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

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7 posted 2001-11-27 04:40 PM


hehehe.
me and tara, with place names changed.
duh, i love it  
-Dave

Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2001-11-27 04:51 PM


"They opened their hearts to small chance
Forever grateful for their newfound romance"

Ahhh Joanna ... those lines above capture it beautifully. Very much enjoyed this tender romance. Big hugs to you both!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

walker
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9 posted 2001-11-27 05:09 PM


Beautiful love story.
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