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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-11-26 04:27 PM


In your dreams I will reside.
Holding you ever close, ever near.
Letting you sleep at my side.
As my heart holds you my dear.

Take an even breath and let it go
for this breeze will I feel.
Keep the strength, don’t be low.
For my hour is nigh, and so real.

Listen to the softness of my words
As I whisper into your sleeping ear
think of us as two soaring birds
flying high, on winged air clear.

Rest well through these coming days
As your dreams are filled and flow
of passion’s moments and ways
which only I will ever you bestow.

Love me as I kiss your eyes and face
Give me your tenderness this night
Dream passionately as love does embrace.
For in our dreams we will be each night.

© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-11-26 05:35 PM


This is a very comforting poem!

Kathleen
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

RosePetal
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2 posted 2001-11-26 06:34 PM


man, i wish i had a guy who would recite poetry to me as I get comfy and ready for bed. That would be nice. Magnus, this is a beautiful gem! Does your wife write poetry??? If so, I'd like to see some of hers.
Startime
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3 posted 2001-11-26 06:43 PM


*sigh* A poem that can't help but touch the heart of the reader and make them want to dream these passionate dreams. Very well done. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2001-11-26 07:30 PM


This was so very romantic and so very lovely.
Take care.......Sue

Suetang

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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-11-26 07:30 PM


As gentle as a summer's breeze Barry!
A soft and tender write my friend.
*sigh*...I'm getting another coffee.
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

walker
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6 posted 2001-11-27 07:02 PM


So romantic, I love it!
Tracey
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7 posted 2001-11-27 10:26 PM


Oh Magnus, you do write romance so well. This is another beauty from your pen of love.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

peaches73533
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8 posted 2001-11-27 10:35 PM


Magnus, Such beautiful words from such a great man.This dream is worth beholding.
Peaches

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9 posted 2001-11-28 06:04 AM


Magnus, you write of love so well. Such beauty and enchantment. I enjoyed muchly.
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

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