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The Waif and I
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The Waif and I |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533
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 In the mist a dead father at three months, fog overwhelmed mother in alcohol, drugs and worse. But eyes, twin beacons shine through as moonrise sheds it's cloak of clouds. Zeus isn't available to grant any wish as he had Endymion whose choice, eternal sleep, was his idea of staying young and good looking forever. One wonders how he enjoyed his vanity with eyelids shuttered in perpetuity. Would he not be doomed to immature dreams? Saturday morning reruns with no fresh air? Pearl's beauty dwells in confinement, in dark shells in the murky brine. The mightiest ships tethered will stagnate, rust and sink from liquids gentle lapping to the calendar's cadence. Narcissus reveled in his own image, wide eyed up to his fall to fate. His end ours. We drown alone while undisturbed, the worldly waters swirl in sameness. Only drowning's occupant will thrash to the accompaniment of the deafening din of descent. The miniscule sands conspired to conceal the Great Sphinx for centuries. Carved ruins of Can~on de Chelle stood deserted in New Mexican rock. A seventh century wild boar knew to seek protection from the king's hunting party instinctively running to the feet of the monk, St. Deicocus. This child Loves me, no saint. But I will supply enough wind to hold the sand at bay, enough light to illuminate the features of the rock from ruin and enough air to forestall drowning, while we both await the penitent Magdalen. "Happy people have no history" - French Proverb [This message has been edited by RSWells (edited 11-26-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I do not understand the lock, unless it is due to the personal photo. The poem is pure Love. Moderators, thank you for removing the padlock.  [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 11-26-2001).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
It wasnt me who locked it. I was reading some stuff over in the Alley. Good write RS. I think someone locked the other one because there was only a pic and no poem. [This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 11-26-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For clarification, the "lock" was applied because the post did not contain a poem. Mr. Wells was notified to have a chance to add the poem. Thank you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 THANK YOU, Karilea. When I first saw it the poem and pic were together. I love your quick responses. To Richard, this is one of the most tender writes I've ever read. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Sorry about that. Mr. Wells is no computer expert. It's the first photo I've loaded myself and I checked first to make sure it did, then pecked my two finger poem. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That's fine, Richard. No problems here. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your 'two fingered pecking' produces a bountiful basket of Love. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderfully done, Richard. Have I mentioned you Texas folk sure so write good stuff  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
Very touching read, and such an angelic photo. Thanks Fee Expressions, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* so very touching. Your heart is in the right place. My heart is touched by the love that you are showing this little waif. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah the love of a child can do things to you, like no other love, and it appears your are smitten! This two finger poem suited that sweet munchkin well Richard. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Richard, the picture of this adorable waif spoke a million words.....ah, but your two fingered pecking?....exquisite! Great depth and love shown here sir. ~hugs, Nancy~ (p.s. did you know that your eyes in your pic follow one about the room?  )~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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PoeticLicense Junior Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 30 |
The lion's heart melts into his pen, beautiful! She is so blessed to have you in her life. PL |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
This child Loves me, no saint. But I will supply enough wind to hold the sand at bay, enough light to illuminate the features of the rock from ruin and enough air to forestall drowning, all children should feel such love.. ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"One wonders how he enjoyed his vanity with eyelids shuttered in perpetuity." Always a pleasure to read your words Richard ... they are filled with such depth and insight. Much enjoyed your sentiments in this thought-filled piece! Best wishes, /Kit |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
My goodness, both the photo and the poem draw me to want to hold this little girl for a very long time. beautifully done.... ever deep...runs |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
My gratitude to you for loving back such a precious gift. She is as beautiful as your writing. Yes...please always love her just as you described. Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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