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If You're Gone (For Joanna)
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If You're Gone (For Joanna) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
If You’re Gone By: Noah Eaton 11/26/01 I've cried an ocean of tears Now I’ve found you, my love I’ve climbed endless mountains of passion Is that enough? I want to hold you close to my heart Brighten my mood when I am feeling blue Now I know what love feels like When my heart's crying for you I miss you so much We live so far apart But deep down inside of me You are the love of my heart And I can’t help but cry If I’ll run out of time To open my arms to you And make you mine… If you're gone Tears fall down my cheeks This whole world is made for us all But I can't help but cry in my bed it seems When you're gone My heart wants you so badly There's a big space in my heart that feels broken Filled with all my love for you... I wish I was holding your hand Feeling the warmth of your heart Will I ever get to see you for real? Will we always be left apart? I miss you so much We live so far apart But deep down inside of me You are the love of my heart And I can’t help but cry If I’ll run out of time To open my arms to you And make you mine… If you're gone Tears fall down my cheeks This whole world is made for us all But I can't help but cry in my bed it seems When you're gone My heart wants you so badly There's a big space in my heart that feels broken Filled with all my love for you... I want to wrap my arms around you I want to hear your lovely heart sing I want to whisper in your ear How much you mean to me… I miss you so much We live so far apart But deep down inside of me You are the love of my heart And I can’t help but cry If I’ll run out of time To open my arms to you And make you mine… If you're gone Tears fall down my cheeks I can almost feel you kissing me But I can't help but cry in my bed it seems When you're gone My heart wants you so badly There's a big space in my heart that feels broken Filled with all my love for you... My heart wants you so badly... My heart...wants you... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, A beautiful message, enjoyed the read |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I knew what I wanted to say in response to this...but....it seems I'm at a total loss for words for real this time. I need a moment to catch my breath, I'm blown away again! Now that I'm able to think straight again after reading this, I want to say that I feel the same way about you. You are very special to me, and allthough distance keeps us apart, our hearts and thoughts keep us connected. Right now, I'm a phone call or an e mail away...but..one fine day I will be 1 foot away from you. Love ya, thanks again. P.S..Can I have a band-aid??? I scrapped my knee when I fell for you LOL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh Joanna and Noah! WOW! This is very good Noah, and Joanna....aren't you the lucky one! ~hugs to you both, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Noah, very lovely write.... ever deep...runs |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, Wonderful writing.. and such lovely feelings shared. I know how hard it is to love someone so far away. It isn't easy.. but so worth it. Keep the faith... and hold tight to the love you have found.. it will happen one day. You'll have her in your arms  .Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
First a spark, an tiny ember, then a flame, and now...a raging forest fire! That little cherub with the arrows strikes the blue pages with flames of love and passionate poetry. Is there a fireman in the house, just in case? |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Noah...nicely worded sentiment...wish I could have someone express that kind of love for me...and keep up hope...if it is meant to be...it will be...continue to love my friend, never let it die for it is too precious and rare anymore...Good luck and keep writing!...Rod Lets Love one another and let God do the worrying, |
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