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Passionate Holds
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Passionate Holds |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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Passionate Holds Silently I am held, certainly bound, to the grasping touch of leather and lace. My breath, a gamble, forbiddenly found in this secure and very hidden place. Desire, bittersweet, as softly it beads. Passion, by your hand, a whispering hold, helpless in thought, only your strength succeeds. In many forms ... many ... tenderly bold. Anticipate, yes, your every pose, waiting for your next, wishing for it soon. Held tight to the thorn of my very rose, my sweat bleeding under a reddened moon. These actions, my fantasy so unfolds, its of you, my heart, that passionate holds. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You write so well the book of your heart. This is abSOULutely gorgeous. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, even more passionate than usual, Craig. Very impressive poetry, much appreciated. Sandra I took a walk around the world to ease my troubled mind-I left my body lying somewhere in the sands of time. (3 Doors Down) |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Another beautiful poem. Admiring you at Passions. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh gosh this one burns up the page. Craig you have outdone yourself this time. You sure chose the right title. BRAVO!!! Magnificent. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Leather, Lace, Bittersweet Desire.....has the making of a romantic night and a passionate mood.....your words take the reader right where they want to be....  Greeneyes~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-27-2001).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
ctowen, I reallyyyy like your writing. Your words are so moving. Another well written piece  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Ahh nice and passionate Craig! Keep it up! RP |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Excellent writing. Enjoy your work very much. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
And a very passionate piece this is Craig. So much emotion in it, deep feelings of longing. I like this a lot. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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