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To Miss Prit.
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To Miss Prit. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa 
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To Miss Prit Emersed deep in blue ink promises, Indelible hell of double fi ligatures strangling my every nuance, Beauty becomes mundane, monotypical calligraphic overkill, Times Ariel, Romanesque in cruelty common as dirt, Be bold! What is the point, I'd like to quoin a phrase the fox was never quick enough for me, Let lazy dogs lie here, Too many clever impressions made Ascenders and descenders, Type, cast in lead, My words never register, Nor pages align. * My apologies Miss Prit should have read Misprint. Olias. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Clever here, and won't even question the intent! Simply witty and clever, as IS. grinning here |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I like the clever turn of phrase in this. Miss Prit/misprint. "I'd like to quoin a phrase the fox was never quick enough for me" Nicely done, Olias. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Clever and witty.Nicely done. Peaches |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Serenity, Thanks serene one, Happy I made you grin. Midnitesun, Thank you for your response, I'm off to pracice the deadly art of TYPO. Peaches73533, Your very kind, Im glad you liked. Regards to all, Olias. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Typo away all you want... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Olias, Enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love this! Make all the typos you want!! It doesn't get much better than this!! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my, what a wonderful poem. I love the way you did this. A true delight to read. Thank you, so much.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Thank you everyone for your kind responses, I will endevour to make as many typo's as I possibly can ( so whats new ). Regards to all and Take care, Olias. |
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