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Lost In His Embrace
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Lost In His Embrace |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Lost In His Embrace His eyes smoulder with hidden fires, passion becomes a flame Searching for the one he desires she's the woman he'll claim Auburn hair attracts attention gaze locks as love ignites Bold and sure he fills with tension as her lower lip she bites Her eyes flash knowing she's called, the air begins to heat From just a glance his heart's enthralled needing her to be complete Soft and yielding her lips caressed open, he tastes sweet wine His love now free to be expressed, on ambrosia they'll dine Hot flesh drives his obsession, tracing each curve with grace Moan escapes, he takes possession, she's lost in his embrace Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WoW! Oh Karen! You do smolder!! lol....good one! Hugs, Nancy. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Very sensual and beautifully penned  It's erotic, yet, classy enough for open I really enjoyed this~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Nancy....*giggling* I can only blame it on all the pent up passions inside of me.  **hugs** I am so glad you liked this one. Mellisa....mmmmmm yes, I did get a little heated with this one but I tried hard not to let my pen smoke too much. I am so glad you like it. **hugs**Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Damn, Karen...think I need a cold shower after this one. You sure captured the moment! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
These are the moments I like...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*WOW* you wove an awesome piece here....hot and steamy.....love it |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Have you been peeking?  Beautiful, Karen! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Duncan... I am glad you feel I captured the moment. **hugs**  James...me too but there just hasn't been any for a very long time. I am so glad you like this poem. **hugs** Charisma...It was just as much fun to right as you had reading it. Thank you, dear one. **hugs** Serenity...*giggling* yep, I have and dreaming too. Thanks, dear one. I am pleased you like it. **hugs**Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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