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Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06
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California, USA

0 posted 2001-11-25 11:58 PM


Her leaving has left me

A world strewn with darkness

Love ripped from heart

Ignoring my tortured pleas

One who loved me so much

Now runs from my touch

God hasn't blessed this union

Memories left burning in ruin

This human betrayal affects my soul

Emotional ties have taken their toll

They say there are many fish in the sea

Yet my eyes are blinded for now

For they only see thee


© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved
peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
Posts 981
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1 posted 2001-11-26 12:00 PM


Your words ring true.When scorned it's hard to see the beuties that were there between you and me.I hope this passes for you soon.
Peaches

RosePetal
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2 posted 2001-11-26 12:14 PM


I hate when people say "there are plenty of fish in the sea"
It doesnt really matter to me when all I want is that one fish that got away!
But....it is true though...life goes on and so does the line on your fishing pole!

RP

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2001-11-26 06:20 AM


Yet my eyes are blinded for now...I know this feeling, you want to hold onto that someone special as long as you can..even if you know it's coming to an end.

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03
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on the horizon of a fairytale
4 posted 2001-11-26 12:44 PM


wow...............

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

Rodney Belcher
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since 2000-06-06
Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan
5 posted 2001-11-26 01:18 PM


Know the feeling all too well. Amazing how we can be so important for so long then nothing to them in a heartbeat. And GUYS are the ones that are cruel? Thanks for sharing Robert and hopefully God will bless you in your "mourning" for your loss...Rod

Lets Love one another and let God do the worrying,
Rodney

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
6 posted 2001-11-26 06:08 PM


*sigh* how sad that you have been left hurting. I know the feeling very well. My heart goes out to you, Sir Robert. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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