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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-11-25 10:38 PM

Brave eyes beckon from clouds infused
with the weather of life.
Please do not cast love down
as it rakes the skin of your dreams
for one last promising blow.
Just answer the voices you think you hear
in evening's unmuttered cadence
and rest weary sighs upon tendrils of wind.
What color is the passion that makes its statement
in the fertile recesses of your imagination?
How boldly does love blush
when kissed with acknowledgement
from two unwittingly fond spirits?
Just stop and feel.
Just examine your memory for all those wonderful moments
and let them scream
whisper
float
roam.
Give your words lips.
Write them a tongue
so that they may speak your soul
and pour passion from the tap of inspiration.

~I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!~

[This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 11-25-2001).]

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

1 posted 2001-11-25 10:47 PM

Beautiful write as always Jennifer. Deep and thoughtful. I’m not good at titles, but I’m sure you’ll get plenty of suggestions here.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

2 posted 2001-11-25 10:51 PM

Good advice.. I have to try that sometime! :-)
I know what you mean when you say to remember all of those happy things in the past rather than all those embarrasing, unhappy things in the past..oh yea and I good title for this would have to be....
Let them Scream
      -or-
Stop and Feel
      -or-
The Harvesting of Spirits
      -or-
howbout we just leave that sucker untitled, cuz it's a tough one to name.
Very beautiful writing

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-11-25 11:31 PM

what about "unspoken inspiration". . .

this is wonderful. . . you speak from the heart, as always. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

4 posted 2001-11-25 11:40 PM

I like this one.I have to agree with Sven that Unspoken Inspirsation was the same thing I was thinking.
Peaches

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