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Eloise
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0 posted 2001-11-25 10:19 PM


The dreams that come to me at night,
Are sometimes quite a breathtaking sight.
But morning arrives and when I awake.
The dream disappears like a melting snowflake.

Reality sinks in, you're nowhere to be found.
I still search for you, but you are not around.
Was it that easy to say good-bye?
Didn't you think maybe I would cry?

So now on the ground lying torn and broken,
Are promises we made that once were spoken.
In the land of dreamers you don't go away.
So now here in my dreams is where you will stay.

But all of my dreams are made up of lies.
So I now need to break this hold that ties.
It's over, it's done. I need to stop dreaming of you.
But my heart still doesn't know yet, that we are through.



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RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-11-25 10:23 PM


Oh how I relate to this! The only thing that helps is TIME. time heals all. (hugs)
The hardest part is letting go of someone who you cared for so deeply.

Tracey
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2 posted 2001-11-25 10:26 PM


This one touched my heart. I hung on to a dream like this for years after I should have stopped dreaming it. It does still sneak in my dreams sometimes, but it doesn't hurt like it once did, now it's more a pleasant memory of my past. I hope that is what you will find too, from this dream.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

EagleScorpion
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3 posted 2001-11-25 10:32 PM


So is this a real person in your life or somebody in your dreams that you fell in love with? Very, very interesting
Midnitesun
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4 posted 2001-11-26 12:23 PM


Some dreams seem more like nightmares. Time to switch dreams maybe? Oh, if only it were just that easy.
peaches73533
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5 posted 2001-11-26 12:25 PM


This fits all too well.And the ties you will soon break.
Peaches

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