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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This is a poem about an experience four years ago when I was went to Walt Disney World and I was depressed and almost committed suicide. This feeling no longer applies to me, for now I am so very happy and feel special) Supernova By: Noah Eaton 11/22/01 Dusk settles on International Drive Caricatures of my hopes subside Premonitions I can’t contrive Abridged in my stupor As my shadow bleeds across the avenue Feeling my heart trembling The silence is deafening I jumped on the street panicking “Sacrifice me God, for I am not worthy!” Oh Mother, Father I hope I may come back to remind you Someday How much I loved you And wished I could be so much more I'm so sorry... It’s all over now, all I have to give Has slipped from my hands The day my star exploded My dreams shattered Approaching the Greyhound trolley Running in front of it carelessly My mom whisked me off the street I fell to my knees Shame, shame, who am I? Running with thoughts of suicide As the skies turned to night My heart was blind All my memories bled before me On this naked dim street Oh Mother, Father I hope I may come back to remind you Someday How much I loved you And wished I could be so much more I'm so sorry... It’s all over now, all I have to give Has slipped from my hands The day my star exploded My dreams shattered… |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oh my god, this is the first non-romantic poem I have seen from you, and I am all tearry-eyed now! Thank Goodness you don't feel like that anymore. You know, whenever you are down and lonely, call on me and I'll lend an ear, my shoulder or a helping hand. I love you dear friend. You inspire me in so many ways my sweet Angel!! ((BIG HUGS)) xoxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox Joanna |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
I had a friend that committed scuicide.. way back in 7th grade too... man... all I have to say is that I'm glad you didn't go through with it.. it doesn't prove anything, and only causes pain. Stay strong and keep the faith alive! Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
This is the first unhappy write I have read from you.Know that if you even start to get down a little bit I am here for you.I will lend an ear and or a shoulder for you to lean on. Peaches |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Aww,this is soooo sad! God, I am so glad you are feeling better about yourself now. You are a wonderful kind-hearted person and it shows through your writings. If you ever need anything just email me. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I am so glad you don't feel this way anymore sweet one. You have far too big a heart to not let the world see it. Hugs to you and I'm so glad you got through that period of your life safely. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
See how far you have travelled in four short years? Now, if I ever hear you talk like that again, I'm going to come down there to Colorado and kick that sweet behind all the way to Florida. Now, you can go back to your quill and write some more about sugar and spice, and everything nice.   |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Pain filled, thankfully not where your soul is living anymore. You have been writing a long time, I see. Me too, started around 13 I think. It's interesting when we look back and see how we have changed in so many ways, but others, stayed just the same Sandra I took a walk around the world to ease my troubled mind-I left my body lying somewhere in the sands of time. (3 Doors Down) |
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