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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-11-25 08:04 PM


The sun streaks through the window
On this magical Summer's day
You look so relaxed and peaceful
On the pillow where you lay

We rise and greet the morning
As we begin to plan our day
We'll spend some time out in the country
So very soon we'll be on our way

Many fields of green sweep past us
Cattle and sheep are in the field
The farmer is tending to his crops
What a bountiful harvest he'll yield

We arrive at our destination
The country air so fresh and clean
As we walk on through the meadow
Towards the gently flowing stream

I've prepared a picnic basket
With a spread I've made for two
On a rug down by the river
Is where I'll make sweet love to you

You pick a chain of daisies
And you place them in my hair
This place is so lovely and quiet
It seems we're the only ones here

You stroke my hair and you kiss me
Can I freeze this moment in time?
You whisper the words 'I love you'
Now I know forever you'll be mine

I lean over towards you
And upon your mouth I place a kiss
Soon we'll surrender to one another
In love's neverending bliss

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Songbird
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1 posted 2001-11-25 08:07 PM


Got to watch out that's what the country does to you! LOL  You should go there more often!!
Bill Charles
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2 posted 2001-11-25 09:16 PM


Suetang - a very upbeat writing, and a pleasure to read...

BC

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-11-25 10:16 PM


Gotta get out in the country...pronto...James
Tracey
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4 posted 2001-11-25 10:52 PM


Oh my, what a wonderful day in the country this is. The scenery, the air, and that picnic and the love....well, it just sounds simply heavenly. Alas, we are now going into winter, but you have given me something to look forward too for next year. I think I will try a day like this....now...if someone will just join me!!!!

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Larry C
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5 posted 2001-12-05 06:04 PM


Sue,
Another awesome poem. I love how your mind works. I love your picture of passion.  

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6 posted 2001-12-05 06:09 PM




(sigh) Oh Sue, this is soooooooo romantic! (sigh) When I meet my dream lady sparrow, I dream of taking her to a beautiful meadow or waterfall and kissing her there! (sigh) You are soooooo romantic, sweet Sue, you share a picnic of romance with us all! (sigh) I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2001-12-08 11:06 PM


*S*  This is a picture of something that is a reality or a dream for all of us.  Very well put.  Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

D.Lester Young
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8 posted 2001-12-09 12:38 PM


Excellent read I enjoyed it.
Suetang
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9 posted 2001-12-09 05:20 AM


Thank you all so very much for your lovely words.  I'm so glad you enjoyed your time in the countryside.  Take care......Sue

Suetang

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