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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-11-25 07:54 PM


I arise out of my bed
At the very crack of dawn
As the sun creeps over the meadow
And I stretch and begin to yawn

The aroma of freshly brewed coffee
Along with eggs and bacon too
I now stumble down for breakfast
I could almost eat for two

No time to sit and ponder
There's so much for me to do
Such a big list of chores to be done
Half for me and half for you

Seven baby goslings
Have arrived this brand new day
Tucked amongst their mother's feathers
Is where they all now lay

The week old baby foal
Has more confidence in his stride
When my chores have all been done
Upon his mother I will ride

So many times I've dreamt
Of life down on a farm
Just like Fern in Charlotte's Web
I'd spend my day around the barn

From high up in the rafters
I'll be perched upon a beam
With the swallows flying around me
So very busy do they seem

I'll inhale the wonderful aromas
Of this farm where I reside
As I look down from my vantage point
Such a wonderful place to hide

But as the day draws to a close
I must return to my real home
There'll be no barnyard where I'm going
No animals free to roam

Just the bustle of the city
Will await on my return
But I'll have so many fond memories
Of the farm life I now yearn

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida
1 posted 2001-11-25 07:59 PM


This is beautiful and of course, us city slickers need the farm life to make us humble This poem reminds me of my friend, Wilbur(hello! if you read this)
Songbird
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Missouri
2 posted 2001-11-25 08:04 PM


Really like this.. I lived down on the farm so long..shopping doesn't matter much to me anymore. I love the country life.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-11-25 08:14 PM


Sue, this is great!  Thoroughly enjoyed my trip out to the old homestead this evening.
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
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where insanity meets breeding
4 posted 2001-11-25 08:36 PM


Sounds like a lovely day for you Sue. Yes, the farm life is a nice change from the pace of the city

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
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OK, USA
5 posted 2001-11-25 08:47 PM


I enjoyed this.I have went from city slicker to farm girl and let me tell you they both have pros and cons.I urge you to spend some time on a farm, it's great. I choose to be in between. I live in the country but close enough that it doesn't take forever to get to the city.
Peaches

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
6 posted 2001-11-25 08:51 PM


Thank you all for your lovely words.  I guess I was daydreaming when I wrote this and I guess life gets so hectic sometimes that you wish you could take some time out from the world and escape to a place far less hectic.  This is my idea of the perfect getaway.  Take care......Sue

Suetang

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7 posted 2001-11-25 08:54 PM


Sue,

You pictured the perfect getaway...let me
get the piece of straw out of my pants..
Enjoyed this.

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