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walker
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0 posted 2001-11-25 07:49 PM



We met by
the moonlit beach
A bed of sand
a blanket of waves
and our uncaged passion
giving way to desire
We kissed
tenderly
tasting our love
as we touched
The waves
caressing our bodies
as we became one
Years passed
I never forgot
and when I saw you
the other day
in a crowded room
full of friends
I wondered if you remembered
that night at the beach

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-11-25 07:52 PM


Walker!  How could anyone ever forget a night like that??!!  This just swept me away...to places warmer, sunnier.  
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Magnus
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2 posted 2001-11-25 11:35 PM


No way...who could ever forget a night on
the beach with all of the frills and .....

Nice passionate poem.

peaches73533
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3 posted 2001-11-25 11:50 PM


Brings back memories.Nice write.I love ocean imagery
Peaches

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-11-26 12:20 PM


Well did they?   Or is that another poem?  James
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5 posted 2001-11-26 07:50 AM


You just decribed my perfect romantic moment.
I have to think the other one involvd could not forget, either. At leat we can HOPE!!
Sandra

I took a walk around the world to ease my troubled mind-I left my body lying somewhere in the sands of time. (3 Doors Down)

Mon Cherie
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6 posted 2001-11-27 11:19 AM


This is just so romantic!!!
And I love the description here:
A bed of sand
a blanket of waves
and our uncaged passion

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2001-11-27 12:13 PM


Wow!  
Who could forget that?  
What wonderful imagery!
This is a keeper.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Duncan
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8 posted 2001-11-27 02:30 PM


Did you make sand angels?  lol  Who could forget that!  Loved this one, walker.
Startime
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9 posted 2001-11-27 03:31 PM


*sigh* moonlight romance on a beach...how could be more perfect than that. How could he possibly forget? *sigh* I love it....visions of such love fill my mind. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Corinne
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state of confusion
10 posted 2001-11-27 03:37 PM


How could this person forget that night?

Cor

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