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Eloise
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0 posted 2001-11-25 06:20 PM


I send to you the music
A special gift from me to you.
I hope it brings you happiness
And does not make you blue.

I send to you the music
Whispered words begin to flow.
Reflections of another time
Reliving thoughts of long ago.

I send to you the music
Sailing through this lonely night.
The resounding melody
Intensifies with delight.

I send to you the music
The angels now are singing.
High up above in the clouds
The choirs gently ringing.

I send to you the music.


© Copyright 2001 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
peaches73533
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1 posted 2001-11-25 06:30 PM


And what beautiful music it is.Thanks.
Peaches

OLIAS
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Pearl city Iowa
2 posted 2001-11-25 06:34 PM


Lyrical lovely rhyme.

Regards,
Olias.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-11-25 06:35 PM


Oh this is lovely!  Enjoyed so much!  
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Denise
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4 posted 2001-11-25 07:31 PM


So nice to hear your music again, Eloise! This is lovely!
Eloise
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Wyoming
5 posted 2001-11-25 09:23 PM


Thank you Peaches  
And also to you Olias. I appreciate you coming in to read and comment.    
Nancy, thanks to you and I'm glad that you enjoyed this.
Denise, I'm glad to be back.  Thank you for the lovely!  

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2001-11-26 04:29 PM



Eloise, a beautiful poem...a wonderful song...

Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
7 posted 2001-11-26 07:46 PM


Eloise
How beautifully your words flowed.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

Elizabeth
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8 posted 2001-11-26 08:58 PM


Welcome Back, Eloise!

This is beautifully lyrical. Nicely done!

    

God bless America, my home sweet home.

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
9 posted 2001-11-26 09:00 PM


Music such as this always falls gentle on ones ears...very, very nice my friend.


jwesley

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming
10 posted 2001-11-27 12:09 PM


Thanks to all of you and your wonderful comments and for the welcome back Elizabeth, it has been a while. So many new and talented poets are here, as well as the old gang, and I'm enjoying reading all that I can.

[This message has been edited by Eloise (edited 11-27-2001).]

Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2001-11-27 07:35 AM


Oh Eloise ... I'll gladly listen to the music that you sing. This was just lovely ... much enjoyed, wonderful to read you again!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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