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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-11-25 03:57 PM



Play It Again
~*~
A whispered song hovers near
wanting to rest
in the hollows of my heart
over and over it echoes
there's a reason
love found it's season
play it again,
whisper gently
fill destinys quest
thrill the emptiness


BloomingRose


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1 posted 2001-11-25 04:08 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Soooooooo beautiful! (smiles) Love sings from your golden heart so beautifully! (smiles) You are soooooo romantic, sweet Debra! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-11-25 04:08 PM


Debra, I love this piece!  There is something so calming and soothing about it...
well done, poetess!  ~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Doug Pretorius
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3 posted 2001-11-25 05:08 PM


It's wonderful to think of love hovering overhead seeking a heart to settle into and warm. Ever ready to ignite something new and delightful with a passerby.

Who else but a poet would think to ask the song of love to find and fill her heart?

Wonderful! Beautiful!

Doug

~lewisone~
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4 posted 2001-11-25 05:21 PM


A lovely poem, so calming to the soul.....
                 ~lewisone~

peaches73533
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5 posted 2001-11-25 06:04 PM


Words that calm the heart and soul, lovely.
Peaches

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6 posted 2001-11-25 07:43 PM


Soft and beautiful, Debra!
BloomingRose
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7 posted 2001-11-26 08:00 AM


Noah~ Thank you. You are always so kind and sweet.

Nancy~ Glad you found this to be peaceful. Thank you.

Doug~ Thank you  

lewisone~ Thank you. Serenity in my soul is my goal, so I am glad you found a bit too.

Peaches~ Thank you.  

Denise~ You are always kind. Thank you.


Mark Bohannan
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8 posted 2001-11-26 09:21 AM


Soft and soothing to both the ear and the heart.  Wonderful verse here filled with the peacefulness we all seek in love.  Loved it dear friend.
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