Fret Not, For No Storm Will Come

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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-11-25 01:32 PM

Like the calm after a storm, my heart rests.
Each measured beat a reflection of within.
Peace flowing through vessels once new.
Now a tranquil stream of life babbling.

Distant peaks of white caps grace my eyes.
As birds and fauna surround and comfort.
Little thoughts of love passing before me.
The peace of a forest captures my soul.

Will this storm return to my soul again?
Can I endure the turbulence of the sway?
Each beat of my blood rests in guarded wait.
On steadied feet I stand before you

Give me yourself that I might protect you.
Let this heart take your own within me.
Fret not when we are within each form
for within my care, no storm will come.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-11-25 01:33 PM

This is a devotional!

Kathleen
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2001-11-25 02:58 PM

Most excellent!!!

Words of vows, quite impressive!!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-11-25 03:21 PM

An anniversarial vow, to be sure...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-11-25 03:31 PM

Give me yourself that I might protect you.
Let this heart take your own within me.
Fret not when we are within each form
for within my care, no storm will come.
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Gosh Barry! These words could be used for wedding vows! Brilliant work my friend!
~hugs, Nancy~

~We are a soul...dancing in a glimpse of time~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2001-11-25 06:34 PM

Magnus, you have made the perfect poem of a knight protecting his fair lady. Thats how this feels to me. I love eveything about it.
Sandra

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2001-11-25 08:40 PM

Kay...I had not taken this as a devotional..
but I must agree...and I think it shall be.
Thanx.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2001-11-25 08:41 PM

Thanx Craig...thank you for your words.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2001-11-25 08:43 PM

Karilea...Yes...I think I will keep this one
tucked away for next June...same day as my
birthday...33 years ago...would be great
for then...an anniversarial vow.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2001-11-25 08:45 PM

gosh Nancy...Now I could take this...turn it
into wedding vows for my daughter Ashley...
for about 40 years from now when I let her
get married....(kidding)...but I agree with
you...Thanx

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2001-11-25 08:47 PM

Sandra...and that pretty well fits what I felt
I was doing with the poem... Thank you.

But it has so many possibilities..

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