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From a night to remember
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From a night to remember |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
A pure heart and soul I saw sitting next to me, sharing thoughts of how things are and how he'd like them to be. A heart that holds a lot of weight, from hurt he tried to hide, and a soul that's wings are ready to fly when the heart ache finally subsides. I carefully listened as he spoke thoughts flooded through my mind . I close my eyes and hear his voice so gentle and so kind. Forever in my heart, and foremost on my mind, the friendship I have found from he who was by my side. Expressions, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and that's always tbe best kind. . . this is well done, you've shown the feelings here very well, and communicated them in a wonderful form. . .  ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Good people.. if only everybody was that way.. well, I think everyone is good whether they believe they are or not. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I agree with Sven! Very expressive...Enjoyed! |
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