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Rainbow's End
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Rainbow's End |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Darkness paused thoughts, needing to know if wind and rain powered my emotion, whispered colors swaying the night sky before these tired eyes. Moon dispersed fragments of gleam, a little bit of presence of moments before, guiding me through thunder, lightening, balancing the silence of you-thoughts. Storming subsided. Reaching the calm, a destination long sought, I shed my pride, caught my mirrored image dressed only in a smile. Wiped the myst from my eyes, the illusions from my heart, let the darkness reign before me. Somewhere, tonight, a rainbow arcs, dreams are deferred, and real, takes on new meaning. Behind these eyes, emerges a vision, a long time coming, my rainbow's end. ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Judy Garland would be proud! oops....I have Christmas shopping to do  Kathleen |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You are so funny *s...have a good time..this will be my second year of being too poor to celebrate with gifts...and anyway..I never took my tree down..it will be lit maybe tonight..to inspire me and leave me comforted. Thank you Kay..hugsssss Maureen "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I hope you find the happy end that you deserve. It sure seems elusive to me. Beuatiful write, M. Huggs Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I believe that you already have all the gifts that you need. . . wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Sandra...I have sent you a message *s rather than post it here. Huggs Maureen "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
"Darkness paused thoughts, needing to know if wind and rain powered my emotion, whispered colors swaying the night sky before these tired eyes." Sorry, I dont mean to repost your own work like that, but I particularly liked the 1st stanza here. You seem to be saying, once the mind is put at ease, and all those trivial thoughts just cease, there still remains the wind and the rain to put your mind at peace. As far as them powering your emotions goes, I feel, my friend, that nobody knows. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sven, I think I just realized what is important in life, last evening riding home after sharing time with someone who is special to me. It took me awhile, but I am making strides. Thank you for your supportive words. They are greatly appreciated. ~Smiling *btw we are having warm rains and lightening in November...very unusual *s so the sky was very colorful last evening late...and helped inspire my thoughts and images. Maureen "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - I wish you the very best with whatever enters into your life... BC |
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