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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-11-25 07:18 AM


         Sound Familiar?

I start my day with happenstance
Eating and cleaning without romance.
Some days I just don't give a damn,
But never the less here I am.

Haunted by the blare of silence
Here where used to be flamboyance
I do not mind the days austere
Just the echo's that persevere.

The days drag on it seems rerun
They fill my time but never done.
I am alone, alone each day.
The aching never goes away.

The quiet reaps me into sleep
The sleep is never ever deep.
I twitch and turn in dreams sojourn
And sorrow feeds on gone concern.

I wait for him beyond the door
I fate on this and nothing more.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-11-25 07:33 AM



Dear Melancholy, sit with me
while I brew some raspberry tea
it seems the dragon's lost his roar
but wait! What is that at my door?

Seems the Moth Queen sits in light ~
now I shall watch Melancholy's flight...

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-11-25 10:24 AM


Some days I just don't give a damn,
But never the less here I am.
=======================================
I do not mind the days austere
Just the echo's that persevere.
=======================================
I am alone, alone each day.
The aching never goes away.
=====================================
I twitch and turn in dreams sojourn
And sorrow feeds on gone concern.

I wait for him beyond the door
I fate on this and nothing more.
======================================


Oh no this wont do ... me Stinky has got the blues ...
His luster wont muster ...  wont light his fuse.
His sky ran dry ... lost its rainbow hues ...
His eyes of wise are blinded to the view.

How to put the ching back in his chimes?
How to put the prime back in his rhymes?
How to put the cadence cool back in his verse?
How to put the golden rule in this poet's curse?

If I but could take away the gray of his melancholy ...
If I but could I would paint his day in shades of Dali
Upon the far stars ... I'll make a wish of come true ...
Gone are the scars ... to the blues we'll bid adieu.

We'll dream the dreams of Eden's butterflies
Ride moon beams and star gleams across the sky
One only has to believe to be able to fly
'Tis only the naive who sigh rather than try

So will you join me in this rhyme scheme dream?
Words written in theme to hold you in extreme esteem.

~~~~~~~~~~~~

*winkiewinkie*

Wanna guess which Dali????     *L*

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~




"Paysage aux Papillons"

~~~~~~

Im not sure but I think thats French for ...
Butterflies are meant to be free    


      



"If I could fly ... I'd pick you up ... I'd take you into the night ...
and show you a love like you've never seen ... ever seen" ... ohoh ...


[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 11-25-2001).]

rwood
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3 posted 2001-11-25 10:28 AM


What? I can't hear you...you must write about it for the next 30 years! We'll kick start you before we let you be put up! But I do wish you peaceful dreams and tickling things in your day!

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2001-11-25 11:00 AM


Sunshine,
Well you read the answer for yourself.   *L*

JM,
It was a tongue in cheek thing, I'm still for la la land and butterflies. Randy Stinky

Rwood,
Just being  cute nothing serious. *L*

Siofra
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5 posted 2001-12-09 06:17 PM


yep..sounds familiar! enjoyed!  

I am many.

Startime
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6 posted 2001-12-09 06:21 PM


Well I am glad it isn't serious.....I was getting pretty worried and was going to give you big hugs mmmmm I think I will anyway. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2001-12-09 06:57 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, I'm so happy this isn't either, I had tears coming down my cheeks reading the melancholy you feel and how unhappy you seemed. (sigh) May you have the happiest holidays! We all love you, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
8 posted 2001-12-09 07:08 PM


Seymour - have felt like this many times wondering if it would ever end. A writing of how feelings are wondered about, sometimes day by day...

BC

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