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Open Poetry #17
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wornways
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0 posted 2001-11-24 09:50 PM

sundown

far away melting
lonesome sun dims quietly
upon horizon
birds fall into reverie
only an ancient wind blows
© Copyright 2001 Erin A. Thomas - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-24 09:55 PM


Erin, this is a beautiful Tanka...
EagleScorpion
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2 posted 2001-11-25 12:37 PM

So thats what they're called? Tankas? I suppose it is a set of words that is intended to paint a picture in the mind. Well, this one made a picture for me, and I nearly felt the shiver of the retreating sun.
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