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Once Upon Two Dancers' Fury (a duet with Moonlight Romeo!)

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Siofra
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State of Suspended Passion


0 posted 11-24-2001 08:49 PM       View Profile for Siofra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Siofra

I wonder who I feel like tonight...
When the night isn't calm
When the field of wind chatters
And I am noticing the absence of my love..

Lit only by the eye of moon
I wait for her now
She who is my all
And she who is my life

Hands pull from somewhere calm
And I feel a pair of windows
Seeing light in my storm
Who bears the  balm of love for my blue evening?

I can only see her eyes
So brown and soft
Just like they were
On that final evening so long ago
When the storm brought us together

Search me for yesterdays
And I will tell you stories of love that surrendered.
Two strangers never felt so wet with love
Until they danced a night eye to eye

A night when the music of their hearts
Played that last dance of love
A dance whose steps they knew
And one that would never end
As long as the music played

Don't you hear the lilt of jealous music
As it roams distances wrought
With the obstacles of other voices?
It demands an ear that heeds.

But, this ear has always heeded
Even in the midst of choirs of angels
Always listening for that one voice
The voice of the highest Seraphim
Still singing in the darkness. . .

Then heed and be still now
For the touch of fingers is now dawning
On a heart yawning wide with love
That pulls contagion from others.

But yet draw not from others
But from the one who loves and is loved
For only in that heart is found the music of love
The music of life
Others are there, but they do not sing
Not like thee...

No other noise they claim to call singing
Could compare to love tongued beauty.
All other notes unworthy
All other sounds dulled.

All other musics unheard
All other sonatas unwritten
Save but for thy voice
A voice I have longed to hear
Since I knew what music was .  




I am many.

[This message has been edited by Siofra (edited 11-24-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Siofra - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding


1 posted 11-24-2001 08:55 PM       View Profile for Tracey   Email Tracey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tracey

You both dance very beautifully to this song. It is beautiful indeed. May the dance continue

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

RosePetal
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2 posted 11-24-2001 10:34 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

You two make a nice team! Enjoyed this very much.

xoxo
RP
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3 posted 11-25-2001 11:58 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

wonderful. . . a dance, and a song still sung. . .

great job. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever


4 posted 11-25-2001 12:19 PM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

this song inspires memories..
JamesMichael
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5 posted 11-25-2001 02:17 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

And may that voice whisper sweet words of love into your ear...james
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


6 posted 11-25-2001 03:24 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


This is lovely! I have no knowledge of who wrote what, only that it is a balance of conversation, and some great lines! Brava, to the two of you!
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


7 posted 11-25-2001 04:17 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

You two dance and write beautifully together!
Well done, hugs, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Robert A
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8 posted 12-18-2001 10:20 AM       View Profile for Robert A   Email Robert A   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert A

great sensuous read there
one of many?
ok, sounds good to me!

Startime
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9 posted 12-18-2001 11:01 AM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

A dance of love that lights up these blue pages with the sensuality of it. This is a great duet..you both dance well together. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


10 posted 12-18-2001 11:21 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Siofra - a wonderful dance together, well done...

BC
JamesMichael
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11 posted 12-19-2001 01:22 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Fabulous...James
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12 posted 09-28-2002 12:46 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Eloquent, erotic, soft
and wet.
bsquirrel
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13 posted 12-19-2002 01:21 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Gorgeous, beautiful writing. (I'm tromping through my library again)
aries_luv_ppl
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14 posted 12-29-2002 01:15 AM       View Profile for aries_luv_ppl   Email aries_luv_ppl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit aries_luv_ppl's Home Page   View IP for aries_luv_ppl

Romantic!

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

 
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