Lovingly Rambling On A Blue Evening

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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-11-24 07:17 PM

There must be you somewhere in my day
as I am
Swirling.
Like fluttering autumn leaves on November trees
I am aflame with the colors you cause
with the ripple of love from your soul.
As your hands sink into my tossed strands
I am remembering why you're here with me
through smiles and almost two winters now.
The lights on my tree look a little different
beneath my smile,
and every breath I take of the season
just utters a very you like existence.
I remember the us that grew
from a chance moment of feet mingling with feet
in rhythm to fun
originating from a lonely New Year's Eve.
How long will I still hold on
if you ever let go?
How long will your presence be burned into my will
when I blink
and you have gone another way
and all I see is your wave in the distance
beckoning me still
or will that be a ghost?

~I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!~

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-11-24 07:19 PM

wonderful. . .

a ramble worthy of your talents. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-11-24 07:22 PM

Oh Jenn!!  I love it!  You 'swirl' beautifully!  This is...straight from your heart.
Great imagery and, oh, the longing!
Enjoyed thoroughly.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Life may not be the song you requested,
But as long as you're here you might as well dance~

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

3 posted 2001-11-24 09:25 PM

What a wonderful love this seems to be. Don't even think about the "what if's", just enjoy the "what's now". It sounds heavenly

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2001-11-24 09:41 PM

Aw, Jenn, it was such a beautiful half-poem! Don't spoil such a beautiful mood with what-ifs about it ending!

Whatever our imagination conceives, our mind achieves. Think it will last and it has a better chance

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

5 posted 2001-11-25 10:01 AM

This felt like the ghost from christmas past still lingering in the yule log of your heart. Your ramblings are to ponder on and deeply admire. I love your way of words like "I am aflame with the colors you cause". Not rambling...burning!

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-11-25 10:34 AM

Like this a lot, I have many a blue evening, and rambles are always welcome.
Sandra

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-11-25 01:22 PM

hands sinking into soft strands.
OMG, this is so rich. Jenn, this gives new meaning to holding on..to love.

Kathleen
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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