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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2001-11-24 06:43 PM

“LOVES DEEPEST CARING”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
My heart was opened, belonging only to you,
when we held each other, at Deep Bay…
Your silken hair flowing, in the soft breeze,
eyes blue and charming, you on display…

Whispered words of caring, into my ear,
I listened to them all, as I dared…
We were the closest, that two could be,
neither of us though, seemed prepared…

Days went by, most happy, but some not,
deep feelings within, this delicate affair…
It was hard to explain, for it started slowly,
this pain that became, too much to bear…

Two lives were torn apart, that final day,
but not because of, love’s deepest caring…
Perhaps it needed to be, another time,
when tender words again, have meaning…
~~~~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-11-24 06:56 PM

wow BC. . . you just pull out the emotions. . .

wonderfully done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-11-24 07:47 PM

Bill...I agree with Sven. You just reach into my heart and give it a squeeze!
Tender, sad write....and, I love it!!
~hugs, Nancy~

~Life may not be the song you requested,
But as long as you're here you might as well dance~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2001-11-24 08:06 PM

Bill,
IWIHWT, it's poignantly perfect.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-11-24 09:13 PM

Well written piece on a sad subject. Love does not always work the way we want, but it does leave some beautiful memories to write about.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-11-25 04:38 PM

Sometimes the people that we love the most are the ones we hurt the most. That's life, is so ironic. Great poem.

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