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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-11-24 02:38 PM


Love For Broken Hearted Lovers


Only love will convince me
that love really exist's.
Could love grow within a heart
that's hard to convince?

Perhaps this is one of those
times when love was only an illusion.
Let us search the intent of our feelings
and come to a logical conclusion.

If you would care enough
to ask me how I feel...
I would probably say to you
"I feel like I love you still."

Perhaps in truth
a little less.
A broken hearted lover
would be my best guess.

JamesLee
November24
2001

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 11-24-2001).]

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RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-11-24 02:43 PM


Love will come to you when you least expect it, and it will be a love that knows no boundaries!
I like this James.

RP

walker
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2 posted 2001-11-24 03:49 PM


I like this poem love is difficult to understand, but somehow we always do.
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-11-24 06:12 PM


Sweet James Michael, there IS no logic to love, that's what makes it so darn wonderful!  So you just go with it ok????

Kathleen
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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4 posted 2001-11-25 10:56 AM


I think you are onto something good sir.

No one ever listened themselves into trouble.

EagleScorpion
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5 posted 2001-11-25 11:41 AM


Very nice thoughts. I feel that love goes on regardless of anything else, physical or otherwise. I feel that it is the gateway into an eternal world far more greater than ours. When nothing else is there for us, there is always truth and faith to guide us.

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

Sven
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6 posted 2001-11-25 11:43 AM


love is. . . and that's what makes us wonder. . .

well done James. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Siofra
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7 posted 2001-12-11 01:03 AM


Thoughts well expressed..conflicted very well done. enjoyed!  

I am many.

arthur
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8 posted 2001-12-11 05:47 AM


unrequited love dies
but slowly
o so slowly
arthur

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9 posted 2001-12-11 04:29 PM


That one word has caused wars,  the fall of
empires....the broken hearts of billions...
and so much more...Thank You.

Domzi
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10 posted 2001-12-11 04:34 PM


Thank you for your expressions upon love.

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2001-12-11 04:46 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Sooooooo touching, sweet friend! I am one of those broken-hearted lovers, and I desire love ever so mucha nd dream that maybe someday someone can love me before my time on Earth is done! (sigh) Sooooooo well-written, sweet friend, I always enjoy your words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


Startime
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12 posted 2001-12-11 08:00 PM


*sigh* **big hugs** I know just how you are feeling.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

rosepetals25
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13 posted 2001-12-11 09:27 PM


James,

   I was going to point out that love is no where close to logical.. but Irish Rose beat me to it Good poem, I enjoyed  

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Tracey
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14 posted 2001-12-11 09:42 PM


Only love will convince me
that love really exist's.
Could love grow within a heart
that's hard to convince?

Yes, my feelings exactly James. I think sometimes we forget how...apparently it's like riding a bike...so I'm told!! Lol. Seriously, great write James, I hope the broken heart is mending itself.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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15 posted 2001-12-11 09:44 PM


Me too, James. Sorry if this is you, feeling broken hearted.
Sandra

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