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Open Poetry #17

I Give To You

~lewisone~
Member

since 2001-11-23

Posts 91
Virginia

0 posted 2001-11-24 02:37 PM

"I Give To You"
Here's a little kiss on your cheek,
For when you lie down each night.
Here's a little hug, to wrap you
up and hold you oh so tight....

Here's a wish for happy dreams to
see you through the night,
And here's my hand to rub your back,
help make you feel alright....

Here's my voice to speak softly
As you are lying close,
Here's my nose to smell my scent,
As you shut your eyes to doze....

If that's not enough to remind you
of me, and to show you that I care,
Then take my heart, treat it gently,
and it will always be there....
©Sharon E.Lewis Nov.2000

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2001-11-24 02:56 PM

Sharon, this is so tender and such a touching poem.

I would have written one like this...if
I could have chosen all of the right
words like you did.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

2 posted 2001-11-24 04:10 PM

Beautiful and tender poem. Very sweet.

~lewisone~
Member

since 2001-11-23

Posts 91
Virginia

3 posted 2001-11-24 06:03 PM

Thank you both for such lovely reviews...
That means so much to me coming from fellow poets who have such beautiful work published, as you both do. I'm grateful for all replies, praising my good, or adviseing
on my faults.....~hugs~ to you both...