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Sven
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0 posted 11-24-2001 01:27 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

*challenge answer, thanks deVine*

once again, my legs begin to run
'neath a bright and shining sun
at first, it was like a dream
or so my feeble mind thought
sitting here by time's stream
the answers so long for sought

once again, dawns the first morn
over the bright, green lawn
again my love, our rose dies
pricked again by the thorn
appearing as petal in disguise

once again, shall love be unfound?
a beating heart the only sound?
a softest touch again I crave
will I again in love abound?
your touch I take to my grave

once again, removes the disguise
I am only who I can be
standing here before your eyes
with the least amount of vanity
again, this change I undergo
my eyes upon love's prize
yours the only one I know
as I sail beyond the skies

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-24-2001 01:34 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

There you go touching my heart again, Beautiful Heart!    

I will put this in my library along with your many other ones. Ahh..one day my selection will be complete..but only when you stop writing..something I hope never happens, Sweet Sven.

*Jenn*
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2 posted 11-24-2001 01:35 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

umm.yeah..*misty eyed Jenn runs straight into the closed door of her library*

~I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!~

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3 posted 11-24-2001 01:37 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress


Umm..yeah..I'm gettin' a headache here! LOL!

~I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!~

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4 posted 11-24-2001 01:55 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

"once again, shall love be unfound?
a beating heart the only sound?
a softest touch again I crave
will I again in love abound?"

Sven, IWIHWT
Coulda..shoulda..woulda....but I'm glad you did!
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5 posted 11-24-2001 10:25 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Challenge met! Have you read the original one yet? Yours is much more romantic I think.    
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6 posted 11-24-2001 11:26 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

enjoyed
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7 posted 11-24-2001 01:02 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

A dream is a wish your heart makes..said one of Disney's heroines
I think you said it better.
Sandra
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8 posted 11-24-2001 01:10 PM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Sven,
I didn't see the challenge but i loved the response.
Keth

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9 posted 11-24-2001 01:13 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

BEAUTIFUL!!

~Life may not be the song you requested,
But as long as you're here you might as well dance~

Nate Dogg
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10 posted 11-24-2001 01:18 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Very nice, Sven!

Nathan

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11 posted 11-24-2001 02:04 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

thanks everyone for your words. . .  

and thanks for the challenge deVine. . . you're right, mine is a little more romantic. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

rwood
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12 posted 11-25-2001 08:52 AM       View Profile for rwood   Email rwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rwood

You do it once again! You are so wonderful in the romance department! Hunk of burning passion just floating into the sunset! Paddle girls! Paddle! LOL!

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

OLIAS
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13 posted 11-25-2001 04:53 PM       View Profile for OLIAS   Email OLIAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OLIAS

Challenge very well met sir, and greatly enjoyed. Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.
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Challenge met and with such beautiful words.
Peaches
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Sven - my friend, you are one heck of a poet.

BC
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16 posted 11-25-2001 09:05 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Regina, 4th floor, romance and poetry. . . LOL. . . thank you. . . but, I don't know about the paddling. . .  

Olias, thank you for reading Sir, glad that you enjoyed. . .

Peaches, thank you so much. . .  

BC, coming from you Sir, that's high praise, for you're one heck of a poet yourself. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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17 posted 04-05-2002 04:54 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress


Loving your work today. Hope thats fine.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

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