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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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*challenge answer, thanks deVine* once again, my legs begin to run 'neath a bright and shining sun at first, it was like a dream or so my feeble mind thought sitting here by time's stream the answers so long for sought once again, dawns the first morn over the bright, green lawn again my love, our rose dies pricked again by the thorn appearing as petal in disguise once again, shall love be unfound? a beating heart the only sound? a softest touch again I crave will I again in love abound? your touch I take to my grave once again, removes the disguise I am only who I can be standing here before your eyes with the least amount of vanity again, this change I undergo my eyes upon love's prize yours the only one I know as I sail beyond the skies --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
There you go touching my heart again, Beautiful Heart!   I will put this in my library along with your many other ones. Ahh..one day my selection will be complete..but only when you stop writing..something I hope never happens, Sweet Sven. *Jenn* |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
umm.yeah..*misty eyed Jenn runs straight into the closed door of her library*   ~I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 Umm..yeah..I'm gettin' a headache here! LOL! ~I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"once again, shall love be unfound? a beating heart the only sound? a softest touch again I crave will I again in love abound?" Sven, IWIHWT Coulda..shoulda..woulda....but I'm glad you did! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Challenge met! Have you read the original one yet? Yours is much more romantic I think.  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
A dream is a wish your heart makes..said one of Disney's heroines I think you said it better. Sandra |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, I didn't see the challenge but i loved the response. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
BEAUTIFUL!! ~Life may not be the song you requested, |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very nice, Sven! Nathan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thanks everyone for your words. . . and thanks for the challenge deVine. . . you're right, mine is a little more romantic. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You do it once again! You are so wonderful in the romance department! Hunk of burning passion just floating into the sunset! Paddle girls! Paddle! LOL! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Challenge very well met sir, and greatly enjoyed. Thank you for sharing. Regards, Olias. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Challenge met and with such beautiful words. Peaches |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - my friend, you are one heck of a poet. BC |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Regina, 4th floor, romance and poetry. . . LOL. . . thank you. . . but, I don't know about the paddling. . .  Olias, thank you for reading Sir, glad that you enjoyed. . . Peaches, thank you so much. . . BC, coming from you Sir, that's high praise, for you're one heck of a poet yourself. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 Loving your work today. Hope thats fine. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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