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Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2001-11-24 12:49 PM

Last night I dreamt you came to me,
...fair Rose beyond compare,
Upon the winds of vespertine,
...a bloom of splendor rare.
I gazed upon your pulchritude,
...espied your beauteous charms,
Longed to hold you close to me,
...to hold you in my arms.
You sang to me love's madrigal,
...we danced 'cross heaven's floor,
We sailed upon the Southern Cross,
...my darling Terpsichore.
Next to your grace, the stars above,
...were but a taper's light,
Outshined by radiance of your glow,
...crown jewel of welkin's night.
But then the dawn, from forth the east,
...first rays of new day's sun,
You whispered softly in my ear,
...farewell, our dance is done,
As gently placed your face to mine,
...our lips in passion pressed,
I felt your body close to mine,
...your warmth against my breast,
Although, alas, a mortal be,
...was by a goddess kissed,
Before you stole into the night,
...upon a rising mist.

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

1 posted 2001-11-24 12:53 PM

Tim, this was a wonderful piece of writing, I enjoyed every line and rhyme in it. You drew a picture of love and a memory that will linger. You are a true romantic and that's great to see.
Look forward to reading more of you work.

Sincerely
Rick

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

2 posted 2001-11-24 01:03 AM

very beautifully written.... your words are music!!!

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

3 posted 2001-11-24 01:09 AM

This is simply enchanting. I love this piece. Made me picture a knight, a maiden, a love, a dream. Absolutely beautiful

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2001-11-24 09:06 AM

A beautiful bouquet, Tim!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-11-24 09:19 AM

Tim,
Beautiful palette, well done.

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

6 posted 2001-11-24 09:25 AM

Tim,

OH! I like this.. so exquisite. Just beautiful Tim

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2001-11-24 09:31 AM

Tim, it's been awhile since you've come round to share your smiles, and with some fine, sweet poetry, I hunger back to times of thee...

This is great! Long live old world poetry!

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

8 posted 2001-11-24 10:20 AM

Simply astonishing. As I've said before, no one does it better than you. Your words are more than poetry, they are perfection.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2001-11-24 10:44 AM

Tim--If one did not know you by your name, they would by your wonderful poetry. So good to read you!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-11-24 12:03 PM

This is exquisite and even that doesn't express how beautiful it read and felt. I hope you have more to share with us.

Kathleen
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

11 posted 2001-11-25 04:44 PM

Glorious imagery and atmosphere, I enjoyed this very much, thank you for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

12 posted 2001-11-25 05:36 PM

Tim,
I love it.Your words fill my heart with love,music, dances, and dreams.Thanks.
Peaches

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

13 posted 2001-11-25 05:46 PM

Tim, this is excellent, very impressive. Look forward to reading more from you.

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