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Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2001-11-24 12:30 PM

I heard her song of beauty as I leapt to closer be
I swam toward the shoreline, but she I could not see
A kiss then as I tired and sank to be with love
Forever to be sung to, as all that sailed above

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

1 posted 2001-11-24 01:20 AM

Short, sweet and beautiful. I like this

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-11-24 01:47 AM

Swept away by a wave of love, Rick? Well done. Now come out of the water depths and sail us another one.

wornways
Member

since 2001-10-18

Posts 204
CA, USA

3 posted 2001-11-24 02:16 AM

love so powerful
alluring in its promise
until in its song
one becomes lost forever
to those not understanding

WARNING: this reader is not prone to terse, canned comments.

[This message has been edited by wornways (edited 11-24-2001).]

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

4 posted 2001-11-24 07:40 AM

The allure of the singing siren...you sailor you!

How the man befit her dreams
She drew from him his force
Settling in beneath the streams
Her White Knight on love's sea horse

You still inspire! Thank you Rick.

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

5 posted 2001-11-24 08:27 AM

Tracey, short and sweet at times seems to express more, thank you for your kind reply.

Midnitesun, thank you for your reply, I shall awaken from the depths and return, you can be sure of that and hopefully treat you to another.

wornways, thanks for the reply, and your post, much enjoyed.

Dear Regina, if I inspire verse as this, I must keep posting replies.
Thank you for your inspiring words as well.

Sincerely
Rick

Thank you to you all.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2001-11-24 09:14 AM

Very beautiful, I love your phrasing.*S

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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