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Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06
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0 posted 2001-11-23 11:56 PM


And I said please
Don't leave me now
Only just found you
Needing you so desperately

My life was empty
Before your precious love
Can't bring it back
Will come to you

Living in wishful memories
Never replacing true reality
Only magnifying the pain
Praying He'll take me

Being with you again
My fondest hopeful dream
Oh this terrible longing
Ripping at my spirit


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1 posted 2001-11-24 12:04 PM


Hi Rob,

I hope this lady comes back to you. If not, not to worry, time will ease your pain.
Plus you will find someone new to show you true love again.

RP

EagleScorpion
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2 posted 2001-11-25 12:21 PM


I have called it "this terrible longing" before, so i think I know how you feel.. you know, I haven't much to say to that, except good luck and many blessings
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