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Broken Hearts |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“BROKEN HEARTS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Broken hearts only sing of grief, happiness may not enter, for only indifference may enter their conflict… Songs written that are sung are of times past with you, no longer hearing your voice, or seeing your smile again… Knowing you once was never enough, closeness was more than words, remembering when two hearts were one… But now they are broken, hardened, without softness, as the deepest parts within fill with tears… ~~~~ |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
What a poignant description of love and loss, beautiful... *gulp* ing a lump in my throat. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Bill, this is aching in it's sadness, nearly painful to read. (((hug))) you don't mind a hug do you? Kathleen |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
have I mentioned, Sir. . .that's it's nice to have you back??? well done, really. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill, It's so wonderful to see your name again  I missed your poetry. This is so sad, but so well done. What else could I expect from such a gifted poet? Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Pell - haven't seen you here before. I welcome your reply and thank you for it. Thank you again... Irish Rose - sadness does ache withing. But one hug from you and one ache will whither away... Thank you for your reply. Sven - thank you my friend for the welcome back. And for your words of friendship... rosepetals25 - I blush with your words of kindness, and I thank you for them. Texas eh? I might see you there soon... And I welcome the hug... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Broken Hearts somehow find their way to healing - all in due time, BCI.. Nice to see you posting again - missed ya..  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
"But now they are broken, hardened, without softness, as the deepest parts within fill with tears…" Hurts like this run deep indeed and you have written of it so well that tears welled up in my eyes. My heart goes out to you. I hope healing comes and then love fills your deepest parts. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Nan - my dear friend. Thank for your words, as always.... Startime - To touch one that reads what I write touches my heart. Healing will come in time, as it must. I'm very grateful for your kind words... |
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