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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-11-23 10:42 AM

(please)take my hand,
Because tonight,
I need love,
love that cares,
A love that lives,
love that gives,
So please take my hand,
Tonight,
Iam alone,
sitting here alone,
wondering
which way
my life has a road
to walk with,
which day will shine
my dreams away,
So,
Tonight,
I ask you
to take my hand
and make my day,
Tonight,
I need you,
Because I used to be
afaird of my lonely life,
So I need you
tonight
to hold my hand
and take me home,
make me feel like
a dream come true,
(Please) take my hand
and comfort me
throught the night,
make me yours tonight,
(please)take my hand,
(Please)I ask you
to take my hand,
Let us walk through
this open lonely road,
(please) take my hand,
tonight....

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 11-23-2001).]

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2001-11-23 11:02 AM

lovely!

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2001-11-23 11:08 AM

I hope that person takes your hand and never lets it go. I enjoyed this Vandana

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2001-11-23 11:09 AM

Sometimes one needs to hear just this...

very nice...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2001-11-23 11:22 AM

Vandana,
I'm sure he wont be able to resist this.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-11-23 02:31 PM

I have felt similar feelings many times...James

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2001-11-23 02:34 PM

With words expressing such deep feelings..
No way you will have to wait long...In
the meantime....enjoy the comfort of your
friends here, who hold your hand in their
own by thoughts wished for you.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-11-23 03:58 PM

yes, Vandana, these feelings are truly universal.

Kathleen

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

8 posted 2001-11-23 04:26 PM

This was wonderful, how can he not take your hand now.

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-11-23 06:15 PM

I have made similar pleas, without success. I hope yours went better. This is a lovely poem.
Sandra

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

10 posted 2001-11-23 07:09 PM

this read like a song to me..
a bittersweet beauty Vandana

"If I could fly ... I'd pick you up ... I'd take you into the night ...
and show you a love like you've never seen ... ever seen" ... ohoh ...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2001-11-23 07:15 PM

now, this sings and flows with so much love. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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