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Velvet Night
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Velvet Night |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Velvet Night Velvet night open arms holding close making strong Velvet night beating heart sweetest kiss manly charms Velvet night breathing sighs touching flesh teasing smiles Velvet night softest lips satin skin loving touch Velvet night gentle stroke sharing love making one Velvet night dreamy eyes hoping heart sharing time Karen Torbiak© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Here's someone giving thanks where it isn't even Thanksgiving. Enjoyed "Happy people have no history" - French Proverb |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*hugs* thank you...My fantasies keep me going with hope that someday dreams may take form in my life. I am very greatful that I can lose myself in visions of my heart.  I am very glad you enjoyed this poem. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
OH boy, yes to all of these words, ahhhhh Kathleen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
The night as it should be.. Sandra |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Hope your dreams come true, wonderfully written, take care. Regards Olias. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think that I would enjoy these velvet nights...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen, you give hope not only to yourself but to everyone else who shares the same dreams...Beautifully done... |
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~lewisone~ Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 91Virginia |
Very well written. Enjoyed! ~lewisone~ |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
form is quite well done i feel a longing expressed though this poem speaks long of some deep longing fulfilled strange thing that i see despite WARNING: this reader is not prone to terse, canned comments. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Lady Like~ Velvety Dream~ Woman Like~ Gimme' some of that!~ Superb Karen! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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