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oh2beme
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0 posted 2001-11-23 12:15 PM


          My Birthday Gift to You

A Birthday gift to give you, I haven’t got.
But a feeling stirring inside, this thought.
A strong desire to make every wish come true.
I’ve started this by giving my love to you.
A piece of my heart and my soul unfurled,
If only I could, I would give you the world.
My world is the only offer I have to give.
But you’re welcome to come inside and live.
I have opened myself up and let my guard down,
But in this world, it is you with the crown.
You are the king with your kind hearted ways,
And this title you’ll wear throughout your days.
For on this day that comes every year,
It is you that friends hold, in their hearts, so dear.
So, as you open your gift, wrapped neat with a bow,
Remember, it’s fragile, take it nice and slow.
This gift, I know, you’ve received in the past.
But the gift of my love is meant to last.
I’ve presented this gift for years upon end,
Yet along with my love, I promise you Friend,
As my heart travels with you wherever you go,
I pray that my love you will forever know!

Happy Birthday My Love, with All My Heart
                                   by:  Debbie Hoskins

[This message has been edited by oh2beme (edited 11-23-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Debbie L. Carr - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2001-11-23 01:22 AM


oh2beme - a most warming birthday gift...

BC

Domzi
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since 2001-09-08
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2 posted 2001-11-23 05:28 AM


What a sweet and beautiful birthday gift!

Do or die!

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2001-11-23 05:59 AM


What a wonderful birthday gift to a loved one Oh2beme! Heartwarming sentiments ... the best gift of all, just lovely!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sven
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4 posted 2001-11-23 07:28 PM


beautiful Debbie. . . just wonderful. . .

anyone would love to get this kind of a gift. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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