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Open Poetry #17

I Heard Your Tender Call

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-11-22 04:35 PM

I heard your tender call

it resounded in silence, quietly, softly
soulfully, skillfully, rejoicing in my heart
behind closed eyes I heard soft cry
a mind meld of thoughts impart

I felt your tender call

you were there, so long ago, a heartbeat away
in keen memory your words still sway
to dance the dance of night’s long song
wherein these dreams your thoughts belong

did I dream your tender call

lace strewn veil of sweet shadows soft
holding pleasant gentle of your touch
then wing me upward, swift hold me aloft
thy tender call is the voice of such

I heard your tender call

it sang soft, soulful sweet and true
as it came from the heart’s heart of you
ably it came from behind the refrain
that I would hear it, again and again

when you tenderly called my name

23 November 2000
©Karilea Rilling Jungel
revised 22 November 2001

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-11-22 04:50 PM

tenderly beautiful

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-11-22 05:10 PM

~it sang soft, soulful sweet and true
as it came from the heart’s heart of you
ably it came from behind the refrain
that I would hear it, again and again~

*sigh*
Beautiful penned!

~*Theresia~*

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

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Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2001-11-22 05:22 PM

From the heart's heart of you ...

Most excellent!!
Quite touching!

OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

4 posted 2001-11-22 06:32 PM

Wow, you excelled with this one sunshine, I'm burning my pen as we speak, into my library it goes, thanks for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

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Tennessee

5 posted 2001-11-22 06:59 PM

The softest voice and poem I've read. As a feather it floats verse to verse. Very beautiful Sunshine.

Sincerely,
Regina

Martie

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6 posted 2001-11-22 07:57 PM

Sunshine--To hear the tender takes a heart of same..like yours, sweet one.

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