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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-11-22 11:09 AM


With tenderness I will caress you
With kindness I will address you
With love I will ever hold you
for my heart treasures you now.

With emotion words will flow to
With passion I will adore you
With consideration I will give you
For you deserve this and much more.

Through wisdom I will remember
Through age I will bestow you
Through words I will admire you
In my soul, you are a part of me.

I will bestow you hope, peace, love
I will be a guiding light up above
I shall hold your hand as we live
a life together, to share and give.

© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2001-11-22 11:52 AM


such a tenderly written one...

Regards,
sudhir

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2 posted 2001-11-22 12:32 PM


This is very tender and lovely! Oops my turkey is done!

Kathleen

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3 posted 2001-11-22 01:04 PM


Now this is the way to love.  You write it so well, Maguns.  Enjoyed.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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4 posted 2001-11-23 05:02 PM


Exceptionally sweet.....If written for that special someone, it's sure to win her heart,
for it was written so beautiful and tender you can tell it came from the bottom of yours.Look forward to reading more of your work.....~lewisone~

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5 posted 2001-11-23 05:46 PM


A man who will write these words to his wife is blessed indeed....and she is very fortunate.  
Martie
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6 posted 2001-11-23 06:51 PM


Beauiful Magnus, and yes, she is very fortunate!
Startime
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7 posted 2001-11-23 10:14 PM


Yes, we can see that "with tenderness you do.." Beautiful and filled with all the love you have for your wonderful wife. You keep love alive in a beautiful way, Magnus.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2001-11-23 11:07 PM


Barry, well done!  From your lips to her heart. Lovely.  Hugs, Nancy.

~Life may not be the song you requested,
But as long as you're here you might as well dance~

Magnus
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9 posted 2001-11-23 11:40 PM


I thank all of you for your comments...
It is late...I will individually comment
tomorrow....thanx again.

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