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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-11-22 05:18 AM


Wanting Me


Where
is your lover?

She walked
away from me.

Seems..
she wanted money
and I told her she could
only have what she
can see.

But...
if it's love
that she wants
she can get
all she wants
from me.


JamesLee
November22
2001


© Copyright 2001 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
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1 posted 2001-11-22 06:14 AM


Love and money .... if one relies on the other, what a sad thing indeed. Nicely said James!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
2 posted 2001-11-22 06:21 AM


yes, James ... well written...

regards,
sudhir

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
3 posted 2001-11-22 07:13 AM


silly girl..I'd choose love over money anytime. Love makes the world go around, love makes you happy, love makes the road of life much smoother and makes the journey joyful. Money??...just buys ya things..inanimate objects... it can't wrap its arms around you and give you a kiss when you're blue. I could go on and on about this subject, so I'll just stop by saying I like this piece and hope it's not really true for you

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2001-11-22 01:32 PM


Money runs out, but true love is eternal.  Great expression, James.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
5 posted 2001-11-22 03:11 PM


Give me love everytime, thoughtfully expressed and much enjoyed, thank you.

Regards,
Olias.

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
6 posted 2001-11-22 03:43 PM


Which is more expressed ...
the painting
or the one that
owns the wall where
it hangs?

Well done JM!!

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
7 posted 2001-11-22 04:18 PM


good one.. true and honest love is more wealth than money any day...

  hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"tomorrow's another day, and i'm thirsty anyway--so bring on the rain!"

vandana
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8 posted 2001-11-22 05:30 PM


enjoyed
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
9 posted 2001-11-22 08:11 PM


Love is a priceless gift that is desired above all other treasures. You are better off with someone who loves that man, my friend, not the money. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

RosePetal
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since 2001-08-26
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10 posted 2001-11-22 08:18 PM


Stay away from those golddiggers James. Real women go for LOVE and earn their OWN money.
Nice write

RP

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
11 posted 2001-11-22 09:51 PM


  LOVE!!!  LOVE!!!  LOVE!!!  LOVE!!

~Life may not be the song you requested,
But as long as you're here you might as well dance~

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
12 posted 2001-11-23 01:17 AM


James - from reading many of your writings I know that you have a lot to give. I wish you the best, as always...

BC

Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
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South Carolina, USA
13 posted 2001-11-23 12:23 PM


Money only makes you want more....Love lets
you feel like you already have all you need
or want.  Nice write JM

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
14 posted 2001-11-24 02:34 PM


This piece is kinda sad....I enjoyed it James...nice write!

Nathan

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