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A Spring Squeaks Under A Crescent Moon
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A Spring Squeaks Under A Crescent Moon |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Two lovers, shimmering eyes, pensive smiles alone beneath a crescent moon as love flows. Tender touches in anticipation of treasures. Fleeting glances, wondering what awaits them. Two hearts beat in unison to the call of the night air. Breezes flowing over heated brows, tempering the mood. A lightness felt by each, as if floating on a cloud. Sighs of passion uttered as one, two entwined. Hands flowing over smooth skin, delicately move. Shivers felt bringing forth a sense of urgency. Lips softly brushing, touching an eyelid, moving. Tongues carving a trail of desire and sensual feel. Lost in a moment of time, passion consuming. Labored breathing echoed into the still of night. Soft moans of total delight following A tell-tail squeak of a spring betraying them. Love within rays of moon, the back seat of a car Windows once clear, now flowing love’s sweat. Skins joined, drops of energies falling, resting. Moonlit memories of love made whole, made one. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Magnus, *sigh* oh yes! I remember that sound...LOL....beautiful warm write. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mangus, Sounds like you celebrated thanksgiving a little early. LOL enjoyed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I remember it as well...from many years ago but seems like only yesterday...Thanx Nancy. Glad you enjoyed it. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Seymour....thanx, nope...but now you have me thinking about it...hmmmmm???? |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
This is amazing, how romantic. It's life! Carolina |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sensual and romantic. Love this side of you! It makes me believe in love again. Thank you, Magnus.  All writing comes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Carol....thanx...I enjoy writing romance... can see it so clear in my mind...much enjoy sharing it... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
There really are guys out there that are romantic about things....Learning to express it is not an easy thing...I haven't always been able to do this....I had to learn the hard way and develop feelings....That is what helped...developing feelings... Not easy for most of us guys to do...we kinda stumble and fall some... Glad you enjoyed this...stay tuned... more to follow... BTW....Happy Thanksgiving. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sigh..I remember those steamed up car windows, and it wasn't SO long ago. Nice softy romantic write, Magnus. Love this style of yours. Sandra |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
British cars are way too small for this kind of thing, its one way to put your back out, but I suppose where theres a will theres a way, lol, an enjoying read sir, delivered with style. Thanks for sharing. Regards, Olias. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra....sad to say that Drive-ins are gone...for that was where the action often was back in the days... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx for commenting Olias....YEP...your cars are a slight bit small...but where there is the will...there certainly will be the way. |
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