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Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2001-11-21 04:57 PM





Lies...

tiny missiles of untruths aimed at the hearts of those closest to us.
When inflicted, they cause...


Mistrust...

a by-product of lies, and the little holes they leave in one’s heart.
The holes become valleys of...


Uncertainty...

the twin brother of Doubt, who is known to take away one’s self-confidence.
Then the one being lied to suffers from...


Humiliation...

master at making the lied-to one feel like a fool.
And then the fool is armed with...


Bitterness...

it sinks in and permeates the very soul of the innocent.
The main purpose is to fuel...


Revenge:

the strongest of them all.
It keeps the circle going, by propogating more...


Lies...


None of us are exempt, not even you...

The road goes on forever, the stories never end, and people are the same the world over!
  
    


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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-11-21 05:02 PM


wow, Sunny.  wow.

that's about all I can muster....wow

hope you are gloriously happy dear.

Kathleen

Magnus
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2 posted 2001-11-21 05:09 PM


Whewwwww....I would say you have hit them
all right on the nailhead....excellently
done...and BTW...love the Pic....very
neat...nice view...

Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2001-11-21 05:52 PM


Hi Kathleen...
well, you know how it is...a writer gets ****** off and just has to write it down!!
Thank you, dear friend!!

Hi Magnus...
and thank you for such a great reply!!  Glad you liked the graphics too!!

...you are me, I am you, we are one...
  
    


walker
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4 posted 2001-11-21 07:35 PM


Great poem, and I liked the style.
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2001-11-21 07:48 PM


Hey Sunny, this is a very interesting poem. But you are supposed to be in happy heaven over there, this sounds kinda crabby..LOL
Happy holidays.
Sandra

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2001-11-21 07:55 PM


Very well done Sunnyone!
Love the presentation.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
7 posted 2001-11-22 04:22 AM


Hi Walker...
Thanks, and it kindof structured itself as it popped out!!

Hi Sandra...
Not crabby, just honest!! But this writing isn't about my personal circumstances, just an observation of the human race in general!!

Hi Nancy...
Thank you much, and glad you enjoyed this bit of improv!!!  Appreciate it!!

...you are me, I am you, we are one...
  
    


Ariana
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Orlando, Florida
8 posted 2001-11-25 07:29 PM


Whew Sonny

I first thought like Sandra that something went wrong.  Glad to hear that it hasn't and you are absolutely correct.  There are alot of people in this human race that are first class cruds.  Your words depicted them well.

A

Irish Rose
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9 posted 2001-11-25 08:04 PM


I came back to make sure everything was heaven in merry ole England, thank God it is!!!!!

Kathleen
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Jamie
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Blue Heaven
10 posted 2001-11-25 08:26 PM


ahhhh-- the human condition----

i almost quit writing about it-- makes my head hurt too much--- nice to see you can do it well enough for the both of us

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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