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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2001-11-21 04:44 PM


I'm letting you go because I think it is what is best
I know that you say you can't be with me, you have your reasons but i'm not going to sit around and wait for you coming and going with the changing of the season
You said some things last night that are very confusing to me, now you ask me to stop calling you although not completely
I understand that you have a job to do and so do I
After much deliberation and tears last night, I realize we cannot be
Perhaps I should ask you what you really mean, would you come straight out and tell me?  
I would like to think you would, perhaps i'm wrong and this is all a game
Sweetie, I want you to know more about me than just my name because now I feel that that is all you want to know
And it is very sad that by your own choice, you won't let our relationship grow


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-11-21 05:16 PM


I know these feelings...its good to let go and step back if unsure of our feelings...time will tell the story...James
CD
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2 posted 2001-11-21 05:34 PM


Powerful in its simplicity.  I can relate to these feelings.  Enjoyed the poem

CD

RosePetal
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3 posted 2001-11-21 11:44 PM


If you want my advice, id tell you to let him go on his merry way because it seems all he wants to do is play! Find yourself a better man, one who will be there for you all the time and do the best he can.
Put your foot down! Like Jagged Edge said "sometimes what may be the best thing for you to do sometimes is the hardest thing to do"

Sven
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4 posted 2001-11-22 02:02 PM


just keep writing it out Laura. . . you'll get there. . .

good work. . .  

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