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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-11-21 03:27 PM


As you depart on your own way
Take happiness with you today
Live a life full of joy and hope
Never say never, don’t say Nope.

Listen to the birds high in trees
Hear distant sounds of seas
Keep your heart open to this
for words of love are much bliss

Cast your troubles into a drain
washing away the hurt, the pain
Letting your eyes again see smiles
Looking into the distance of miles.

Live for each moment of your day
for each moment is ever here to stay
Look into these  eyes shining here
and never again look back  my dear.

For your future is your way to peace
Where comfort and happiness release
Letting you become once again whole
as bells of joy in distant towers toll.

© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-21 03:31 PM


   A wonderful poem filled with hope and joy. I love it!! I love it!!!A poem to be truly thankful for. *sigh* **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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2 posted 2001-11-21 07:34 PM


Wonderful Magnus!  A poem filled with such hope and wisdom.  Beautiful words spoken from your heart.  Enjoyed.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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3 posted 2001-11-21 10:29 PM


Very beautiful,Magnus. Lots of emotion within.
Sandra

Magnus
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4 posted 2001-11-21 10:31 PM


Thanx Sandra...and I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving...for you and all of
us do have much to be thankful for,  even
when we are down...

Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2001-11-21 10:32 PM


You are right, my friend.  The future is the way and holds the key to tomorrow.  This one spoke to me, Magnus.  Great work.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

peaches73533
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6 posted 2001-11-21 10:35 PM


This shows not to give up hope for it can save your heart and soul.
Peaches

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