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Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

0 posted 2001-11-21 02:08 PM

Please Believe Me

by Michael

I wish I could make you believe
that what you think of me is wrong.
You’ve always been my dearest friend
and make my heart break out in song.

I’m honest and I do not lie.
Coincidence got in the way.
You know I think the world of you.
I know no more that I can say.

I worry of our friendship lost.
I’ll do whatever that I can.
I never meant to hurt you, dear.
You know that I’m an honest man.

Today I cannot find a smile.
I’m hurt, like you, and needlessly.
The truth should never cause one pain,
but now that’s what it’s done to me.

Please know I love you and I wait.
Today my heart can find no rest.
Of all the friends that share my life,
you've always been my very best.

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-11-21 02:10 PM

This goes way deep, Michael, way deep.
Blessings to you..

Just...Kathleen

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-11-21 02:15 PM

Michael, this is very touching and well done.
Enjoyed. Thanksgiving blessings to you my friend.
Love those dimples! Hugs, Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2001-11-21 02:16 PM

This is so deep and moving Michael. Beautiful words from your heart.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-11-21 03:29 PM

Beautiful poem Michael, and I hope everything turns out well in the end.
Sandra

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

5 posted 2001-11-21 06:42 PM

Micheal,

*hugs* I'm sure the friend will realize what a wonderful person you are... give it time.. they will see your shining heart.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

6 posted 2001-11-21 07:33 PM

Friendship it's so dear and so important. Great poem.

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2001-11-21 08:14 PM

Beautifully written...

~Tier

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

8 posted 2001-11-21 11:40 PM

Does this friend have a reason not to believe u? It will work out sweety. In the meantime, have yourself a good thanksgiving!

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

9 posted 2001-11-22 04:27 AM

Michael,
this is heartfelt and very honest, just as you always are. I think if your friend reads this and is a true friend, they will understand what is in your heart. In the meantime, as you can see, your house is full of friends that love you......

...you are me, I am you, we are one...

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

10 posted 2001-11-22 09:17 AM

Wonderfully written, greatly enjoyed.
Regards,
Olias.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2001-11-22 01:27 PM

Perhaps in time she will see what she has. This one emits loneliness and sorrow throughout each line with an honesty of heart that makes me hope she sees soon. Very good write, Michael.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

12 posted 2001-11-23 06:48 AM

This was so moving Michael ... you've captured such genuine emotion within these lines. Very nicely written.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

13 posted 2001-11-23 07:14 AM

Very nicely written Michael. I hope the friend hears it and understands.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

14 posted 2001-11-23 09:33 AM

This poem is about the warmth of your heart
That makes it beautiful
Liz

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

15 posted 2001-11-23 11:41 AM

Everyone, thank you for your support and for taking the time to read. My best to each of you.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

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