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SnowLeopard
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0 posted 2001-11-21 11:07 AM



look within me, beyond the
fair skin and radiant eyes

for my heart is where the beauty lies.

a graceful saunter, lithe and refined

but in my soul is where the wealth you’ll find.

look within me, beyond my glow

and the real woman you’ll come to know.


With a setting sun cavorting with darkening hillsides, she waits in
sleek stillness, spying her prey.

[This message has been edited by SnowLeopard (edited 11-21-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 SnowLeopard - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-11-21 11:10 AM



Well hello!  With writing like this, I for one certainly look forward to more of your work here at Passions!  Welcome, and Please! Check your E-mail for a special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2001-11-21 11:14 AM


Wonderful write.  Looking within.......is always the best way to see........
Great first post, and welcome to passions.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Carol Lina
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3 posted 2001-11-21 12:23 PM


well expressed and professional kinda,
very nice poetry here!

Carolina

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2001-11-21 12:25 PM


Welcome, snow leopard. And thanks for that nice morning glow. Looks as if you possess a warm glow inside and out.  
CocoBaci
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5 posted 2001-11-21 12:47 PM


Welcome Snow Leopard 2this family of sweet PoetFriends and may I say a splendid first post you have shared with us2day...
Hugs2U
*~coco~*


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2001-11-21 01:01 PM



Lovely first post!
We'll be looking for more from you!
   ~NancyLee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Sudhir Iyer
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7 posted 2001-11-21 01:04 PM


Welcome to Passions... I am sure you will love this place...

Great first post...

Regards,
sudhir

RosePetal
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8 posted 2001-11-21 01:40 PM


Hi Snow! Welcome to Passions! I can't wait to see more from you. You will absolutely love it here.

RP

Startime
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9 posted 2001-11-21 11:09 PM


WOW!!!What a wonderful beginning.....we all need to look within. Welcome to Passions. I know you will love it here. All the poets here are the best people you will find.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Lone Wolf
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10 posted 2001-11-22 01:47 PM


This was fabulous, SnowLeopard!!  

Welcome to Passions!!  I look forward to reading more of your work.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

ctowen
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11 posted 2001-11-22 04:30 PM


Thy heart is true.
Excellent write!!
Welcome to Passions.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
12 posted 2001-11-22 04:53 PM


very nice... fits the name *s
Charisma
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13 posted 2001-11-22 05:07 PM


Beautiful entrance.....looking forward for more....and off course, Welcome to passions.

Charisma ~*TMP*~

Titia Geertman
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14 posted 2001-11-22 05:22 PM


Well well well SnowLeopard, that was a delightful first hit you've made here.

Really like to look within
to see what nice poems more
you've got in store  

Titia


A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just let me know. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/http://comm

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 11-22-2001).]

vandana
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15 posted 2001-11-22 05:28 PM


welcome to passions enjoyed
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