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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-11-20 09:43 PM

Dream of me under the moonlit falls
Take me with you to enchanted lands.
Keep my heart smothered with love
And ever softly whisper love to me.

I love your softness, your warmth
It flows through my veins even now.
Give me the comfort of your kiss.
Embrace and hold me to your breast.

Fly me to the highest peak of your life.
Take my soul softly into your own.
Ever know that you grace my eyes
for within dreams I do hold you now.

Listen as I say that you are so dear.
That this heart will ever hold you in.
Remember my words that I do give.
Truth with love I do so much tell.

I wait for the morning light to wake
and climb from the peaks white
Your love I will treasure and take
for this feeling, so special...is right.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-11-20 09:46 PM

Hey there, I like being able to see you..nice photo.

And the poem, well just add it to the list of ultra romantic beauties that you have created.
Sandra

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2001-11-20 10:06 PM

Ah yes, a handsome face goes along with those works of love! Magnus all I can say is....your wife is luck..very luck! Keep the romantic poems coming, I will be here to read them : )

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-11-20 10:10 PM

What a beautiful love song! And that's a warm kind face to match those warm words.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2001-11-20 10:23 PM

Sandra.....thank you....if only I could have
written romance about 35 years ago...

It would have been easier courting my wife.
She would have melted into me...even more
than she did...OOOOOOO...that would have
been so neat.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2001-11-20 10:25 PM

RosePetals..YEPPER...I will keep them coming.
So, enjoy the ride...I am the lucky one..
I get to read them to her sometimes...and
her eyes tell me what she feels...A very
good feeling seen from them.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-11-20 10:26 PM

YES!! Nice face, nice eyes, great poem. Doesn't get much better than this.

Is that a dimple in your chin?
"Dimple in the chin...devil within"..giggle
Hugs to Barry tonight, Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2001-11-20 10:27 PM

MidNiteSun....thank you...now I can take the
mask off....and the make-up too...
LOL....glad you like this...and the PIC.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-11-20 10:27 PM

YES!! Nice face, nice eyes, great poem. Doesn't get much better than this.

Is that a dimple in your chin?
"Dimple in the chin...devil within"..giggle
Hugs to Barry tonight, Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2001-11-20 10:29 PM

Nancy...hmmmm, let me go take a look in
the mirror...dimple? maybe where my wife
socked me one today...(joke).....
Thank you for your exceptionally heartening
words...much enjoyed...BTW...yep...
coffee was cold, but tasted great after
the microwave trick....thanx.

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

10 posted 2001-11-20 11:00 PM

An enchanting dream indeed. You certainly write romance very well. I like this

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

11 posted 2001-11-20 11:10 PM

It makes me think of a friend. He does not write poems but he speak often enough of it. LOL He might as well as my only friend beside my online friends. I wish someday I will love someone and that person will say those words to me.

~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordinary things extraordinary.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

12 posted 2001-11-20 11:50 PM

A poem written to someone you love cannot be badly written...you have done her proud, good sir

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

13 posted 2001-11-21 12:25 PM

*sigh* a poem of true love and romance. Definitely a poem to dream by. I will have to remember this one when I go to bed tonight. Very well done.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

14 posted 2001-11-21 12:30 PM

Magnus, your beautiful expression here is truly captivating...
Thanx4a splendid read2dayPoetFriend
*~coco~*

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

15 posted 2001-11-21 07:15 PM

Romantic poem, my favorite. It's beautiful, perfect.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

16 posted 2001-11-21 08:21 PM

Tracey, thank you....I try...and I do enjoy
writing romance.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

17 posted 2001-11-21 08:23 PM

Aries..be patient...maybe someday that person
will learn from reading poetry and then will
be able to say those words to you...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2001-11-21 08:24 PM

Thanx Balladeer....and btw....how is the
weather in Ft. L? Charleston is chilly,
but nice.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

19 posted 2001-11-21 08:25 PM

Karen, where do you put all of these poems
that you collect from us....Are you making
a paper pillow of poetry, or something?

glad you enjoyed...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

20 posted 2001-11-21 08:28 PM

Coco, U R VerE WeLcome....ThankU 2 4 ur
comments.....Gee...that is not easy to do.
HappE U enjoyed this...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

21 posted 2001-11-21 08:29 PM

Walker....thanx much....I will try to come
up with another one soon....happy U enjoyed
my write.

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

22 posted 2001-11-21 09:58 PM

Magnus, This touched my heart.A great picture to go with great words.This is truly romantic.
Peaches

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

23 posted 2001-11-21 10:26 PM

Peaches...thanx bunches..now go read my
next one...Glad you enjoyed this..

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

24 posted 2001-11-22 07:21 PM

A real swooner Magnus. You do write passion and love so well. I admire that quality in a poet. Thank you for sharing!

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

25 posted 2001-11-22 07:46 PM

Your welcome Regina....happy that you enjoyed
this little write.

Domzi
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

26 posted 2001-11-22 08:43 PM

This poem is really romantic. Lucky woman!

Do or die!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

27 posted 2001-11-22 09:31 PM

Thank you Domzi....nope...lucky man,
Happy to have this woman of 30 odd years
with me...And we are by no means perfect.

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