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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2001-11-20 07:34 PM


Thoughts of you hold me throughout the day
I know I cannot look the other way
You are who I want to be with, I want no other
Why have I fallen the way that I have?
I don't know, I can't answer that
I know why you say we cannot be but you don't understand that's not what i'm looking at you see
You are a wonderful woman, with many talents
Look at me....for who I am.....tell me what you see
Is it possible?  I think I see a chance for you and me

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peaches73533
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1 posted 2001-11-20 08:07 PM


Sad write.Hope you get that chance.
peaches

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2 posted 2001-11-20 09:40 PM


always hope Laura. . . always. . .

from your heart. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

ParisGrl
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3 posted 2001-11-21 03:27 PM


Peaches,

Thanks for reading,  I hope i get the chance too.  

John,

I am hoping but i don't think its going to work out.

~Laura~

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