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Robert William Gruhn
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0 posted 2001-11-20 04:18 PM


If tear drops talked
What would they say
I just fell softly
From face of joy

Satin skin beautiful bride
Just said I do
Lovely ride down cheek
Glowing with true love

Another tear not happy
I slid burning afire
From cheek of anger
Could feel the hatred

Next tear feeling pain
I fell into hell
From cheek in agony
Wish I hadn't left

Then tear suffering sorrow
I should have stayed
That eye so lonely
Blinking me sad goodbyes

Tear born of laughter
I loved that trip
Whole slide down cheek
Felt so tickly good

What different lives lived
That these tears have
Short yet so profound
Without them no emotions



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1 posted 2001-11-20 04:25 PM



I would hope only happy tears for all, but knowing that is not possible, I will just say thank you for this wonderful insight into what a tear might say...

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2 posted 2001-11-20 06:29 PM


This was awesome! Now you really got me wondering what tears would say if they could talk. Sometimes it makes me feel better to cry even if its because of something sad.
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3 posted 2001-11-20 06:35 PM


*sigh* all these tears I am familiar with....You have written about them with the tender feelings that always come with tears. Very well done, Sir Robert. You are not only talented but a gentle, loving man as well. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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