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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-11-20 02:45 PM


No More No Less

She called to ask what I was doing.
I told her I was holding out for what I want.
She ask me what I wanted.
I couldn't tell her any more or less
because I didn't want to beg for what I wanted
and I knew if she was the one that possessed
what I wanted she would give it to me through
her desire and actions and not by my asking.
I wanted to hear her simply say that she loved me.
Not my money or my house or my car but only me.
Now I patiently wait to hear the words and feel
the touch only a special woman can possess.
I will wait a day a week a month or a year.
I expect no more and I will accept no less.

JamesLee
November20
2001

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1 posted 2001-11-20 02:47 PM


quote:
I wanted to hear her simply say that she loved me.
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I expect no more and I will accept no less.


And you deserve no less.....

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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2 posted 2001-11-20 07:33 PM


It's hard to wait sometimes, for the one you love to say those words you long to hear, but you are wise to wait.

"I expect no more and I will accept no less."


peaches73533
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3 posted 2001-11-20 07:36 PM


James,
You deserve that and no less.I hope it comes soon.
Peaches

Startime
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4 posted 2001-11-20 07:37 PM


You deserve the best and I am glad you are waiting for it. Love is not something that happens because we tell them what we want them to say. It should just come natually from their heart. James you deserve the best not someone who is only interested in what you have...that isn't love. There is no magic in that kind of love. **hugs**  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

rosepetals25
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5 posted 2001-11-20 09:47 PM


James,

   So well said. Love is worth the wait, no matter how hard that might be.  Besides, how could she not love such a loving soul as yourself?

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

catalinamoon
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6 posted 2001-11-20 09:51 PM


Wow, do I ever need to cultivate this attitude. Good one, James.
Sandra

Tracey
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7 posted 2001-11-20 11:22 PM


Very true James. It must be given of free will and not for the asking. If it’s love, it will be given. And don’t accept anything less. I like this, touched me.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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