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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-11-20 02:28 PM


Chili

It was just
her way, simplifying
adversities, making
less,
more

money, scarcer
than hen’s
teeth

knowing everyone
would arrive
expecting the normal
fare

no one knew
that the carburetor had
to be replaced

the old ‘frig
had given out
to make way for a
new old ‘frig

even the coyote
had eaten
better of the rooster
just yesterday,

and still, they would be
coming,

hungry

it was not in her
to turn anyone
away

so she did what she did

it was lemonade time

she took inventory
of stock at hand,
silently counting mouths

and for every man
multiplied by two.

“We’re breaking tradition!”
she’d say,

hoping no one really
missed the smell of a big bird
roasting,

nor the niceties that
normally accompanied
white and dark
no red
no black
no green salad
nor baked beans,

but beans of a kind,

just chili

one of the men looked around,
took in the moment,
went and got beer

it was a feast

the best Thanksgiving
ever gobbled.


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-20 02:32 PM


Enjoyed this Sunshine...James
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2 posted 2001-11-20 02:33 PM


Yep..that's the way it is some times..and the better times often come from the memories of just such times...


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3 posted 2001-11-20 02:49 PM


All memories are precious, whether traditional or not, Karilea....

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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4 posted 2001-11-20 05:03 PM


Beautifully done Karilea...we all experience
moments when we just can't give what we want.
And it is still so special when our all is
enough...Thank you for the poem...Lets one
think a lot.

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5 posted 2001-11-21 03:44 PM


She can make chili for me any time.  I LOVE chili and the hotter, the better.    Nice work, Karilea.

Michael

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6 posted 2001-11-21 03:45 PM


This is a great story, and may you have the happiest Thanksgiving, no matter what you eat (lol)
Sandra

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7 posted 2001-11-21 03:50 PM


I loved this story, as the dinner is always nice but it is the company I love even more, and the message of this story came to me loud and clear - Happy Thanksgiving Sunshine!

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

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8 posted 2001-11-22 10:17 AM



Wonderful responses from all of you!  Happy Thanksgiving, everyone!

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9 posted 2001-12-18 10:24 AM


I clicked on cause I love chili and this was nice to read before lunch


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10 posted 2001-12-18 10:57 AM


Sunshine,I would rather have chili anyday than turkey.

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11 posted 2001-12-18 11:16 AM


Beautiful story to which I can relate  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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12 posted 2001-12-18 11:24 AM


Ooh... I think chilli is nice. It's so hot, the heat seems to travel down from your mouth, all the way to your belly. I guess in this case, it warms the heart too!  

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13 posted 2001-12-18 11:28 AM



BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) Mmmmmmmm...I love chili, and having company for dinner is the most lovely feeling of all about dinner!
(smiles) May you have the happiest holidays with your loved ones, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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14 posted 2001-12-18 12:46 PM


MMM chili! with white rice. u made me hungry!!!!
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