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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-11-20 09:57 AM



Bring Me Down Easy

~*Marge Tindal*~

Here I am soaring in heartfelt flight
not wanting my heart to touch ground
Far above the clouds of reality
Oh, please if I must touch down
bring me down easy in your arms
forever tethered by your charm
Winds of change may buffet me about
but, a safe landing is you
of that, I've no doubt~
So bring me down easy, that I might lay
in your arms forever ...
and one more day~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-20 10:11 AM


This is so sweetly beautiful, Marge. Your love poems are charming.  

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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2 posted 2001-11-20 10:27 AM


Lowered into arms , tethered by charms , yes
beautifully expressed Marge
Hope

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3 posted 2001-11-20 10:31 AM


Marge,
Ok my arms are open land away. Kisses and hugs.

Martie
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4 posted 2001-11-20 10:48 AM


a big sigh for this lovely piece...and a hug for the poet!
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5 posted 2001-11-20 11:04 AM


Marge,
you deserve this {{{{{HUGS}}}}}

and many regards ,
sudhir

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6 posted 2001-11-20 10:06 PM


I sense you may always smile? but this looks great on you....hugs Marge~


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7 posted 2001-11-20 10:24 PM


Marge, you have just put my thoughts into words. I only wish I could have written them this well. This is a lovely poem, such charm and enchantment in it

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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8 posted 2001-11-20 10:55 PM


What a nice way to come back down to the 'real' world. But can I just hang out on that kite for a little while longer? Please?
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9 posted 2001-11-20 10:58 PM


I'll bring you down easy, dear Margie. Please know
My touch will be gentle and won't let you go.
You will not be injured for I will not fail.
I just need to get my strong hands on your tail
So we can go soaring once more with delight..
For I've never had such a wonderful kite!!  

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10 posted 2001-11-20 11:12 PM


Elizabeth~
Thank you soooooo much~

Hope~
Love sharing these feelings with you~

Seymour~
Well ... just alrighty then ! !

Martie~
Thank you for both the *sighs* and the *hug*~

Sudhir~
Awwwwww, I appreciate you~

GreenEyes~
I am wearing a big smile for sure.
Thanks, lady~

Tracey~
Well ... I certainly thank you for the reply~

MidniteSun~
Just love being reeled in gently~
Thanks for the thoughts~

Balladeer~
Your thoughts always make me soar~
You're preciously special~
Love you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2001-11-21 01:53 AM


Easy it will be Marge...not too much to ask...James
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12 posted 2001-11-21 02:17 AM


I saw this title yesterday, wanted to read but real life...lol...called me away.  You have written my heart.
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13 posted 2001-11-21 02:19 AM


Oh Marge, this is a precious write...
I truly adored the expression you've penned here it's absolutely beautiful and I shall place this poem in2my PoetryChest4many more reads sweetie...
Hugs2uMyFriend
*~Coco~*

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14 posted 2001-11-21 02:31 AM


Don't we all wish to land that way!!  It's past my bed time and I need to get myself to sleep now....this is a nice way to go.  Thank you Marge for your dreamy thoughts.
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15 posted 2001-11-21 08:13 AM


bring me down easy in your arms
forever tethered by your charm
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

more poetic grace...
love it!

Hugs,
Deb

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16 posted 2001-11-21 10:10 AM


JamesMichael~
The perfect reply ... thank you~

Duncan~
Just knowing you came back to read and reply,
gives me a smile~
Thank you~

CoCoBaci~
Awwww, thank you sweetie~

BluesSerenade~
Thank you for letting me know you found it so gently comforting~

BloomingRose~
LOVE that word 'grace' ... thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

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17 posted 2001-11-21 10:25 AM



This is lovely...

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18 posted 2001-11-21 10:50 AM


the smile is lovely on you Marge.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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19 posted 2001-11-21 08:28 PM


Oh, Marge, this is fabulous! Wonderfully expressed!
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20 posted 2001-11-21 08:34 PM


Marge....I envy how you say your words of
love so well...I feel as if I am there.
They are always beautiful....thanx...

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21 posted 2001-11-21 09:00 PM


Lovely Marge....just so gentle and...yes, lovely.  
Have a blessed Thanksgiving my friend.  Hugs, Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Marge Tindal
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22 posted 2001-11-27 06:03 PM


Karilea~
You are sweet to think so.

GentleSpirit~
Thank you dear lady~

Denise~
Always my thanks to you, dear friend~

Magnus~
Awww .. just my little heart-ink quilling again~
Thank you~

Enchantress~
*Hugs* to you sweet gal~

*Hugs* to all~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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